Where is?

What can ease this pain i feel,
Ease this ache that refuses to heal,
Did i ask this way my life to be,
Where is the respite i long to see?

Who'll help me with this toture cope,
Encourage me lest i lose hope,
How can life be so cruel and mean,
Where is the shoulder for me to lean?

When will my sufferin come to end,
My heaven sent my troubles tend,
Will the story of my life turn a new page
Where is he that'll free me from life's cage?

Why is hapiness in my life so scarce,
I continue to ask with this last verse,
Does my life story have to be sad,
Where is the joy that longs this poor lad?

Author's Note

Doesn't look too good to me what do you think?

Reviews

[M.Babu]

Why is hapiness in my life so scarce,
I continue to ask with this last verse,
Does my life story have to be sad,
Where is the joy that longs this poor lad?

I liked this final stanza alot. Deadly man. There were some lapses in flow but heck i have a lot of those. This is good stuff man. Keep writing! Nice start