ANOTHER ROTATION

Staggering Fear.

Enveloping will.

Never stopping.

Never still.

 

Killing dreams.

Destroying morale.

Breaking seams.

Hopes totaled.

 

Pride quintupled.

Minus the Courage.

Hearts overwhelmed.

Souls pillaged.

 

Money matters.

Pills prescribed.

Depressed daughters.

Sons but bribed.

 

Corruption rampant.

Leaders immoral.

Strength is fading.

Temptation viral.

 

Lips sealed.

With seductive kisses.

Eyes sewn.

Sight in pieces.

 

Hunger morphed.

Turned to Enterprise.

War erupted.

Oil the prize.

 

The big man lost.

The little discouraged.

That is the cost.

Of Hearts disparaged.

 

Words misused.

Suits crispier.

Power undervalued.

Deception pricier.

 

Another rotation.

History repeated.

The bad- incarceration.

The worse- reseated.

Author's Note

I'm beginning to like this short-sentence style structure....no idea what it's called???
Thanks for reading.

*Human rotation by paladin rinon*

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I like the many true and powerful statements.
"Money matters.
Pills prescribed.
Depressed daughters.
Sons but bribed."
In a world controlled by the 3 per cent. Common people and common sense will be tossed to the road side. A strong ending to a poem with the words of truth are alive in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

amazing love the structure of this I liked this a lot thought it was brilliant

[Carrion.]

I love how in each line it's made up of 2-4 words. It's so powerful, I love it.

[Ruth]

I love this structure! I like to use shorter lines at times too...has more impact I think...but then some would disagree lol
This is brilliant love! A dose of reality and BAM! All there...go out and scream it....needs to be heard! Superb work! LOVE this!
xx

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Guided and skillful, a most thought provoking piece that leads the reader to inspect even the minds of colied interprtation, well done, great read.

[Shadin Manning]

Sounds like all the troubles in the world, nicely written :)

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

great job!really challenging, getting your message across using such economy...but you manage this very well, and you threw in some real thought-provoking lines too -

"Hunger morphed.
Turned to Enterprise.
War erupted.
Oil the prize."

great job bro keep it up!!

NB - kinda reminds me of Kipling's "Cities and Thrones and Powers" -look it up :)

[Marie Harrison]

Lots of action in this poem!
I enjoyed this new style for you.

[Raven Starhawk]

Mind numbing. It delivers chose cuts of well honed language and voice.

[Thea]

This is style of poem is great and really looks interesting...Sometimes, I enjoy reading short poems more because they appear to be meaningful...
Full of deep meaningful thoughts...
Excellent work, M. Babu... :)))

[SINDE]

And I'm starting to like this short-sentence style of review.
Awesome!
Hunger morphed
Turned to enterprise
War erupted
Oil the prize