INSIDE THE BOX

INSIDE THE BOX

A Poem by M.Babu
"

Think outside Your Box

"


There’s naught but thought

To rescue thee;

From the chains that bind

Creativity.

Deep in your box

Of formless marsh.

There’s a drainage hole 

Big enough to stash.

That beast of sorts,

Who’s had his way.

In your sea of thought,

He left you a

Bay.

Stranded alone

For him to watch.

You struggle and claw

Inside the Box.

 

-M.Babu-

© 2011 M.Babu


Author's Note

M.Babu
Scratches...trying to escape crazy Writers Block:)

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I had to read this more than one time, Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Some boxes need to torn apart by reading the old writers. My motivation come from good music. Leonard Cohen, Dylan and Edwin Starr. I go to the Poets from the old times. The Poets of Europe, Asia and Africa can be found and teach us real words and emotion. Getting out of the box need proper motivation. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What fun! I think this was rather creative, perhaps the block is unblocked!! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is aboslutly fantabulous

Posted 13 Years Ago


"There’s naught but thought
To rescue thee;
From the chains that bind
Creativity."

I couldn't agree more

Posted 13 Years Ago


your scratches are turning into absolute brilliance..:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice one! I liked this.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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