INSIDE THE BOX
A Poem by
M.Babu
Think outside Your Box
There’s naught but thought
To rescue thee;
From the chains that bind
Creativity.
Deep in your box
Of formless marsh.
There’s a drainage hole
Big enough to stash.
That beast of sorts,
Who’s had his way.
In your sea of thought,
He left you a
Bay.
Stranded alone
For him to watch.
You struggle and claw
Inside the Box.
-M.Babu-
© 2011 M.Babu
Author's Note
Scratches...trying to escape crazy Writers Block:)
Reviews
nice one:-)
Posted 13 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
well seeing as that piece was quite good, which block dost thou speaketh of?
Posted 13 Years Ago
well seeing as that piece was quite good, which block dost thou speaketh of?
wonderfully captured! "trapped" is often how one feels when struggling to overcome a creative block. Isn't it odd that one can feel trapped in one's own body? great work, michael!
Posted 13 Years Ago
wonderfully captured! "trapped" is often how one feels when struggling to overcome a creative block. Isn't it odd that one can feel trapped in one's own body? great work, michael!
I LOVED this
I really do
first two lines pulled me in
I think I almost drowned
To me this poem was very inspiring
100/100
Posted 13 Years Ago
I LOVED this
I really do
first two lines pulled me in
I think I almost drowned
To me this poem was very inspiring
100/100
0 of 6 people found this review constructive.
This is amazing, as a writer, I can relate to it :P
great job :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is amazing, as a writer, I can relate to it :P
great job :)
Oh that wretched block, that thief of thought!
However, tmethinks the block faded to nothingness as you wrote the above incredible lines.
'Deep in your box ~~ Of formless marsh.' .. there's magic here
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oh that wretched block, that thief of thought!
However, tmethinks the block faded to nothingness as you wrote the above incredible lines.
'Deep in your box ~~ Of formless marsh.' .. there's magic here
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Heheh, this is something I can really relate to. Writers block is a pain, but only with great struggle can we truly succeed in finding our inspiration, be it from thinking outside the box or from within ourselves. Thought-provoking and creative!
I like this a lot! Great job my friend :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Heheh, this is something I can really relate to. Writers block is a pain, but only with great struggle can we truly succeed in finding our inspiration, be it from thinking outside the box or from within ourselves. Thought-provoking and creative!
I like this a lot! Great job my friend :)
Well if this writers block, give me some of what you just smoked!
I felt this is a fine write digging down deep, to pull this cool wright out
good work!
We ebb and flo like rise and sleep...
Rossen
Posted 13 Years Ago
Well if this writers block, give me some of what you just smoked!
I felt this is a fine write digging down deep, to pull this cool wright out
good work!
We ebb and flo like rise and sleep...
Rossen
Beautiful flow great work
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful flow great work
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I am trapped inside the box, needing to be set free. For inside the box is the mind wanting to release the words. Great poem my friend.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I am trapped inside the box, needing to be set free. For inside the box is the mind wanting to release the words. Great poem my friend.
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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M.Babu Nairobi, Kenya
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