GARBAGE TRUCK

Clean Your Mind!!!

GARBAGE TRUCK

Hey?

I’m your garbage truck!

I see you twice a week.

No? You don’t remember?

I don’t blame you;

I’m quite meek.

 

And No!

You’re not hallucinating

This is very real.

I’m here for all your refuse;

Not the type

You touch and feel.

 

Yes!

You have another Bin;

Brimmed with mental Trash.

It needs some desp’rate

Emptying

From your pain, regrets,

And doubts.

 

So…

If you wouldn’t mind,

I have a billion stops today.

Dumb it all

In the back.

I’ll burn it and

Erase.

 

-M.Babu-

Reviews

[Maureen Mwaniki]

how do you do that?how do you just make the dumbest things so sensible?

[Celeste21]

Romantic in a subtle way. Trashing all negativity, helping someone free themselves.

[jay-lyse]

I like how a simple truck can have such a wonderful power. To erase all the bad, or take away the unnecessary nonsense would be brilliant. Great poem.

[Nastia]

taken the thoughts right out my head i see, what a great truck that would be. we all need one of those now dont we? great poem huny bum

[Coyote Poetry]

This would be a good garbage truck. Add hate and violence and maybe the world could be a better place? I like this poem. A good idea for releasing the pain, regrets and doubts. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Thea Fuentebella]

this one's filed with emotion. i can imagine it being said out loud. humorously true. great write!!

[Aishwarya Subramanian]

haha i thought of writing something like this too. about my flower pot though.

[lifesmith]

I got quite a lot of refuse...mind stopping by and picking it up?
your poetry is mad addictive

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice one again..enjoying your work.

[Mwash]

Great read, we mostly focus on the physical trash and forget the mental kind nice work bro