MUTINEERS’ TALE

Just a mutineers tale

ARGH!!…Mutiny sees I!!

With my unpatched eye!

Our wages slashed again,

While the Captain’s entertained!

Five women in his Chambers

While we best these stormy weathers!

MUTINY I see! I see MUTINY!

 

AYE!!…Mutiny feels I!!

On my unbathed skin!

Rum neigh locked away,

While the Captain’s high on gin!

Drunk into a stupor

As we wait as does a suitor!

MUTINY I feel! I feel MUTINY!

 

UGH!!…Mutiny tastes I!

With my drying tongue!

‘Tates and Fish ev’ry day

As Captain’s plate’s full of lamb!

Daily rhapsodies of fruit

While we bear burnt roots!

MUTINY I taste! I taste MUTINY!

 

 AYE!! AYE!! A-

 

YER!!…MUTINY finds I!

On my own damn ship!

First Mates and me’ crew

Plot against me like whimps!

T’would be best if you get up

Get to work this instant!

Or better company awaits

With the SHARKS your assistants!!

 

(Shuffling) AYE AYE! CAPTAIN!!

 

-M.Babu-

Author's Note

Trying to keep inspired. More scratches on my online notepad (:

Reviews

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Hahaha i just love ths!!its a break from what am used to from you...this is more playful and funny though we do get the weight of the message!great story line!awesome love!just awesome!

[Quinn Blackburn]

wickedly delightful, Michael! wonderful wordcrafting :o)

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Wow man this is amazing :) The way that you have the stanzas flow is fantastic :)

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

AWESOME! Great rhyme,and what a story! Ths is ur best one yet bro,love it! Why didn't i see ths earlier?!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Sharks abd Pirates ^.^ i was automatically caught in the poem just by the the way it's wrote, and it's about pirates :D haha, good poem :)

[Rossen]

busted me up reading {{{out loud }}}

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I feel as if I am there, witnessing the events. Good poem my friend.

[Murtuza]

Lol... I love it!