MUTINEERS’ TALE

MUTINEERS’ TALE

A Poem by M.Babu
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Just a mutineers tale

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ARGH!!…Mutiny sees I!!

With my unpatched eye!

Our wages slashed again,

While the Captain’s entertained!

Five women in his Chambers

While we best these stormy weathers!

MUTINY I see! I see MUTINY!

 

AYE!!…Mutiny feels I!!

On my unbathed skin!

Rum neigh locked away,

While the Captain’s high on gin!

Drunk into a stupor

As we wait as does a suitor!

MUTINY I feel! I feel MUTINY!

 

UGH!!…Mutiny tastes I!

With my drying tongue!

‘Tates and Fish ev’ry day

As Captain’s plate’s full of lamb!

Daily rhapsodies of fruit

While we bear burnt roots!

MUTINY I taste! I taste MUTINY!

 

 AYE!! AYE!! A-

 

YER!!…MUTINY finds I!

On my own damn ship!

First Mates and me’ crew

Plot against me like whimps!

T’would be best if you get up

Get to work this instant!

Or better company awaits

With the SHARKS your assistants!!

 

(Shuffling) AYE AYE! CAPTAIN!!

 

-M.Babu-

© 2011 M.Babu


Author's Note

M.Babu
Trying to keep inspired. More scratches on my online notepad (:

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Yarrrr!!! The reviewers are right. Timeless and amusing, with great word choice! I was hoping for the remaining senses. The captain can hear the mutiny, I suppose, but there'd still be a stanza missing about smelling.

Posted 13 Years Ago


funny how this is a tale written of the old days yet it is seen in everyday life. nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


Powerful and fun, a grated multitude to times past and times forgotten, well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


fun read I liked it I love anything about Pirates so I was drawn to thin :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the perspective shift... Twists it quite nicely:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow this was a really nice read, Thank you for sharing and very interesting way of writing by the way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


:) Enjoyed this very much! A fine introspective of a mutineer, LOL

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is a lovely write..reminds me of captain jack sparrow somehow..lol ;) keep writing..will visit again :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


you have a unique way of writing and a unique point of view and a unique way expressing it!! I loved it! never expected that i'd read a good poem about pirates here. very jolly and wicked.
ARGH! Cap'n's high on gin! AYE! AYE! AYE! hahaha
I idolize you!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This one was very entertaining! With a different pirate-like tone! I like it

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Nairobi, Kenya



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