Sharing Sin

Him and I.

 

Us. Two beautiful people. Living the most shattered of lives. We share a sin. We can still feel, We can still see, We can still hear, Every unkind word. Every break up. Every fight. Every memory. Every tear. Every lost friendship, And every damned mistake. We know we did all of this to ourselves, And it hurts to this second. One wants freedom. One has freedom. But we both just want it better.

Author's Note

Does color changing add anything to my wring?

Reviews

[thecoolone52]

i liked it.. but its kinda your typical falling out of love poem you know what i mean? not tryin to be a dick or anything

[thecoolone52]

i guess so, i kinda like the colors i guess it put emphasis on certain words?