I am poorly made

Fragile

I could shift mountains from its place,
That cannot be measured or weighed .
But Incapable to quite thinking about you,
Convinces me that I am poorly made.

No bulk upon me of grief and stress,
Could ever weigh me down to my brace.
But In your absents I shun and shatter,
Into bits and pieces I scatter .

Unshaken I remain, facing the storm,
That gushes towards me in multiple form.
You spill into my memories never to fade.
Too weak to Unremember, am so poorly made.

To achieve the absents of your thought,
Is the war I lost, but I fought.
Not a moment without your musings could I seize.
Forgetting you relentlessly brings me down on my knees,

My deeply felt failure is to forget you.
And another grievance was when I lost you.
For all my life this is the price I paid.
Unable to forget you, am so poorly made.

Reviews

[Anjali]

You've made me realize that 'I' am so poorly made cuz I can never write like you. So much talent! So much creativity... You write so good. I am mesmerized. People need to know about you and your art. Wow.. keep on writing.

[Mustafa Merchant]

🙈🙈🙈thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. You wear your grief with pride. Though you talk words of sadness, your words reflect strength. I loved the rhyme and the words. I feel so good to read such a lovely poem from you after a long time.

[Onlyme]

I could really feel the emotions come alive inside this epic poem about fragility. Articulate, expressive and very very heartfelt and projected with style and class.

[Mustafa Merchant]

Thank you dawn. Emotions are always alive. They look dead when not expressed. Thank you again for taking time to read.

[Onlyme]

You have to express yourself. Or you just make yourself so numb and sad inside and out. It's not health for anyone to keep their emotions trapped deep inside. Always let them out. And your very welcome. Keep sharing.

[Mustafa Merchant]

The reason emotions are under the lid cuz they are not valued when out. So it’s Best they stay under.

[Onlyme]

I do understand your point of view. But I value emotions and feelings. And prefer openness and honesty. I know that is not always the case in this world sadly. And that is very sad. And like you said. not valued. That is tragic. To think no one cares, at all.

[¿]

Will be honest, this one's one of your bests by far yet!
A matter of gloom and blue described with poetical intense...
Sometimes we're enemies of our own soul, no? Cause sometimes we lose the things which are beyond precious to us knowingly or unknowingly....and at the end, regrets become our partner that hardly wills to leave...
I could feel it while reading it though this one's sad...Thanks for sharing :)

[Mustafa Merchant]

Thank you tahsin. Your reviews have always inspired to me post my written poems. Cuz I write many but post a few.

[Najam Us Saher]

Please post all the poems you write. I love reading them and I never want to miss any.

[¿]

That's such a pleasure to hear from you dear Mustafa☺ I'd also like to read your other poem which you haven't posted yet...umm...no, would love to read😀

[Najam Us Saher]

Me and Tahsin always there to read your work :)