Contrast emotions

No shades of grey.

During the chills of December,
In my head and in my heart I remember.
The very 1st igniting touch of our skin’s.
Sprinkling fuel to the fictitious breathings.

The twinkles escaping through your unshut lashes
Glaring at me like the lightning flashes.
Your body responding to my sliding touch.
It collides us closer ,that simmers and shivers so much.

The tangled lips do not wish to be untangled.
The winding arms around do not wish to unwind.
The merging breath dose not seem to unmerge.
Ever progressing kiss just takes us deeper to submerge.

Could I suffer and suffer ever more,
Wanting the pain in wounds so sour.
The unquenched desires of us in rain.
Never made it to monsoons and never will again.

Every descending drop scars my soul.
Drenched in agony, the pain takes the tole.
Liquified sorrow drips from all over me.
Soaked in your memories, I am meant to be.

Another storm rises in my head.
Keeps me awake and falls in my bed.
Clouds of eyes pours a dissimilar rain.
Starting with your musings, water cycle repeats again.

Reviews

[¿]

Yeah, I'll be diving deep to this once I learn to! Promise😊!

[Mustafa Merchant]

It’s ok tahsin. Everything has its time. So it’s ok to not feel certain things that time has not bought to you yet.

[¿]

Indeed agreed!👧

[Najam Us Saher]

Everytime I read your poem I feel your emotions because you write with such passion and pour your heart out. Simply saying someone that we miss them is easy but voicing that restlessness into words and making others feel that too is not everyone's cup of tea.

[Mustafa Merchant]

Thanks najam. You always return some good feels with the review you write for me.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome.

[splattercore]

Could I suffer and suffer ever more,
Wanting the pain in wounds so sour.
The unquenched desires of us in rain.
Never made it to monsoons and never will again.

The pain we feel could be likened to "changing with the wind" so to speak. If pain could be an environmental impact, then as harsh as the conditions are, the mood is going to be affected. To be honest, I can most definitely see that in my environment. People's moods change with pain or pleasure, all depends on what they are willing to handle.

Nice piece!

[Mustafa Merchant]

Thank you for your in-depth review. I appreciate you taking your time out and reading it.