Moon to my heart’s ocean

The uncalm feeling.

The ocean of my heart,
behaves towards you like it’s moon.
The load of emotions shifts in waves,
forming a chaotic typhoon.

The distance from you determines my heart’s instability,
Being close to you seems the least probability.

The Unstable surface holds allot within,
under your blissful reflection.
The very gaze at you swirls in me ,
with allot of affection.

A tidal wave rises, bringing the message
of your unknown nearing presence.
The moisture from the splashing waves,
delivers your familiar essence.

In the turbulence of your absence,
My heart remains in an unsettled commotion.
The ambience of your musings shimmers,
Upon me as the Moon to my hearts ocean.

The unsilent crashing of emotional waves,
Is heard through the spilling retinal caves.
Beholds the approaching sentimental rage
,unleashed in words on the blank page.

Your surreal appearance,
sets my universe in motion.
The only clarity in my gaze is you.
Rest of the world is in distortion.

I Am more than prepared ,
to live in your illusion.
Until my pulse stops to feed your musings.
You’ll continue to be the moon to my hearts ocean.

Reviews

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As I've never given away my life to someone so specially......I can only say some words that I feel...
The love gesture might be too intense that's why someone can feel the allure even by converting the ocean of heart act like moon...that too for the special one...
Maybe someone going through such...feels so huge entire like a universe....and thinks or truly feels the presence of the special one sets the universe!
Such a thoughtful sweet love truma....thanks for sharing😊

[Mustafa Merchant]

Thanks for such a wonderful in-depth review. Hope every reader could dive this deep. Else my words don’t hold such power.

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You're already welcomed!😊

[Anjali]

This feels so real, so original... I can feel what you are trying to say through this. It is beautiful! I loved this

[Najam Us Saher]

You make me speechless with your every poem.
The way you have described your love as being vast as an ocean is very effective. Saying that the person you love is a moon and writing about ocean and moon together adds up more to your poem. You have mentioned about waves which are like messages from the moon. These little elements in your poem are very thoughtfully written. I love your poems as they are filled with truest love and carry a deeper meaning.
Till the end I was moved to read your words as they carry such emotion.

[Mustafa Merchant]

Thank you najam. I am developing a sweet tooth for you words after every poem I post. Thank you for such a lovely review.

[Najam Us Saher]

No need to mention thanks ever.
It was my pleasure reading this.