Feel good

Feel good

A Poem by Mustafa Merchant
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Feelings of this month

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Would it make you feel good.
Feel good like you should.
May be to know it’s a little odd.
To some one you are the god.

You posses the ultimate power,
To nurture the heart and devour
To turn the sleepless nights grim,
Into a soul stirring dream.

To shape the night of love and care,
Into a sleepless dark ambiance to stare.
To nurture the feeling of your love in me.
And to abandon that adolescent love free.

So feel good like you should
To know that your musings are like food.
It hungers my soul the moment I wake up.
Feeds on your thoughts until I breakup.

I think of you
In the rippling folds of my bed sheets.
I think of you.
As my soul’s, my mind’s and my body’s needs.

I think of you
As the sun burns on my skin in this month.
I think of you
As the Salty fluid rolls down my cheeks in this month.

I think of you
As an unrelieved sigh in this month.
I think of you
As I prepare to again die in this month.

So feel good
And feel good like you should.
If to know that I think of you,
In my very breath and every pumping beat that I could.

© 2018 Mustafa Merchant


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So passionate, your words are easy to be felt such was your description.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mustafa Merchant

6 Years Ago

Thanks Najam. You always manage to understand the passion beneath.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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My friend this time my observation was on the last stanza...dug and found deep!
Sistol and diastol can bear so much in them....
The great read😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mustafa Merchant

6 Years Ago

Systol and diastole huh? Well am so content with this review. It really made it go systol and diasto.. read more
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6 Years Ago

Oh...the biological and informal spelling confuses me friend!
Good day!
Mustafa Merchant

6 Years Ago

Spelling don’t matter. I got the msg.
This once an edited version. Allot of mistakes in last one .

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Mustafa Merchant
Mustafa Merchant

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