Men

An acrostic of my name!

Many a men race around the orb

Elated to find a woman, classically absorbed

Lovingly her eyes are, must she be from Heaven?

Antics may be placed

Nevertheless, the man does love her warm embrace

In him he surely knows, that only God can create a woman, with such pose.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

really nice, i like the simple flow to it, and truth... rhyming well done... i like this :)

[shoaib]

nice work !

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I like this
a very creative Acrostic,
Nicely written!