Rainbow Tears

The rainbow spreads itself across the sky;

I wish to join the white birds as they fly;

Up up with the snow white angels, so high;

Instead stuck on earth, tears falling from my eyes;

Author's Note

You can also view this on my website here:
http://www.angelpoetry.org/poetry/2012/poem_0000043.html

This is my second attempt at a Quatrain form poem. My first is here: Poem: Inner Thoughts Will Kill. If you would like to know more about Quatrain, then click here

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

this is a lovely poem, not something i would pidgeon hole into some category. to me it's free verse and i find it to be exhilerating to be freed from all those archaic tombs and stencils we must fit our art into.write for yourself, not for others. change your style anytime you want you have all the freedom in the world to not box yourself in to expected trends.

[Keith]

Nice poem Jock!