Itty-Bitty And Pretty

She shall giggle at my total geekiness;

Her eyes shall sparkle at the sight of me;

Her smile shall gleam so beautifully;

Her nose so itty-bitty and pretty;

That even the angels shall show jealousy;

I shall stuttter, gasp and choke as I ask;

Averting my large dark chocolate brown eyes;

Scared, yet hoping you see I'm not like other guys;

Asking you to dinner, but I'm so shy;

I know if you say yes, my heart shall fly;

And without you I would just rather die;

Author's Note

you can also view this on my website:
http://www.angelpoetry.org/poetry/2012/poem_0000041.html

Reviews

[Keith]

By the way, best title ever!

[Keith]

Beautiful poem with a great sound. You have articulated a blokes worst fears. Top job mate, keep coming!

[Just Another Writer]

This is really nicely written.. Very, very sweet too! I liked the last line of the first stanza and the first line of the second the best, and the imagery you used throughout. Beautifully pulled together!

[Michael G.]

Sometimes a guy just has to take a chance.
Well done, sir. Good content. Good write.
Hope you got the dinner date.