Under The Knife

I'm so tired of the way you treat me;
I'm wishing you would leave me to be;
I promise you that I am not lying;
Despite to you that is all that I do;
I can tell by all the checking you do;
Calling my friends to see what I'm up to;

Can I live the second decade of my life;
Without feeling like I'm under the knife;
Without you digging up dirt that's not there;

Reviews

[Traci]

A very honest, soulful write. Direct, to the point.
Sending much love and light to you, dear Jock.

[Jock Engelman]

Thank you very much for your opinion and your support. I have grown up in foster homes and family homes where people either didn't care where I was or what I did but for the past 12 or more years I have lived in a house where everything I do is double checked and my bank is monitored and my life is generally ran by other people even when I don't realise it.

[radio raven]

It's good, nice and short and straight to the point.....

[Jock Engelman]

Thank you for your comment :)