Success

Success is counted sweetest
Is what all chant,
But the ones who grasp doesn't
About it,they always rant

Ask I now that,
Owning a house hefty with magnificent view
Is success pursuant to vous?
But what about the housemates to get
Who stands by vous even in your blues?

Owning a car with rings four
Is success pursuant to vous?
But what about getting a night walk
With the one, truely vous adore?

Owning attires worth crore
Is success pursuant to vous?
But what about getting a smile that
Glamorize vous more?

Owning dollars to fly off daily
Is success pursuant to vous?
But what about a trip to the nearone,
Whom with vous can talk freely?

But the irony here lies,
That Success is money,
by this notion ,We have to abide
Even if that means,
to let our happiness get aside

(P.s.- vous is 'you' in French)

Author's Note

insights will be helpful

Reviews

[Rye]

such a powerful read as well as emotional, nicely written and well expressed

[Muskan]

Thank you Rye

[jacob erin-cilberto]

success in friendships and love is much more important to some of us than success in career or money.
And often those with the greatest successes never seem to have enough.
Needs a few edits...but very strong and accurate theme here.
j.

[Muskan]

Thank you so much jacob
Will highly appreciate to know the edits as well!