Characterless

Yes,am characterless

Hey listen !
See that girl in short clothes
She isn't of character sober
Is all WT I have heard
She surely is a tart

Look her skinny jeans
To give hints, is all what it means

Did u see her pout?
Its just a way to call up for ngt out

Who is that boy on her door?
Agh... She is such a w***e

How can u let her go alone?
Don't u know how unsafe the tym is,
Or do u want to see her with clothes torn?

See, all that makeup
She must be desiring a hook up

Oh my God!
Look that hour hand on 2 in clock
Is that the tym when she shld give her home's door a knock?

She don't even know how to cook
For a girl, useless are all these books

U know she is getting a divorce
She must have done something wrong
Else this wouldn't have happened ofcourse

Did u hear that she didn't get boy as her child first?
Oh my pardon !
Why to this poor soul u did this worst!

This is our Indian society's language different
Or m I rgt if I call it a discriminant?
~Muskan

Author's Note

Ignore punctuation problems if any and typing errors

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Characterless'
Muskan,
I feel for an individual caught up in this lifestyle- dangerous and soul destroying. Very descriptive plea to the reality of life for many.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Muskan]

Thank you dear kathy

[Abhishek Izy]

This one mentality, I understand and is very embarrassed to say, isn't quite changing in our society yet. Unlike how we have grown acceptance to menstruation and female equality etc, we are yet to wire our brains to stop judging people based on their clothes and lifestyles. I really hope it does change someday.

Love you writes, buddy!

[Muskan]

I hope the same.
Thank you for appreciation !:-)

[Mary Christabel George]

Dear Muskan,
Through your poetic style you have attempted so well in addressing all the confrontations, judgments and hurdles that a woman faces in this country. And I am sure your share of injuries must have resulted in penning such a beautiful work. I am glad I have come across someone who voices her concerns as a women and whom I can relate to because our concerns are same like so many women in this country.

[Muskan]

Thank you Mary for you visit and ur worthy words

[Ofoma Pamela]

Each line explained the different struggles women face in different parts of the world. A really good poem, well done.

[Muskan]

Thank you for your words and ur visit!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting journey....not fond of the text message type delivery of the words, but if written in standard English...it is a keeper...she is the one nobody really notices...but i am sure deep inside there is a character just waiting to come out.

[Muskan]

Thank you for visiting 😊

[Anshuman Aryav]

Nice piece..
I agree with your words and this beautiful piece remind me of my poetry "Mai Nirbhaya Hu"
I think you are new here, so welcome to our family. And please visit my profile and read my piece of writing "mai nirbhaya hu". I hope you will like it.

[Muskan]

Thank you for appreciation, certainly will😊