Sometime

more iddy bitty musing

Sometimes memories are so strong that you never forget

Sometimes the light is too much to see

Some time has gone by and your heart still isn't here

Time is too fast and you'll die before you make it

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[fwvalidus]

A good quick poem for sure. I would change the last line though so you arent directly saying "you'll die before you make it". Think of something like "we never have enough time" or "time will outlive you" etc. I think its too blunt right now. Good content within, I enjoy takes on time despite the popularity this topic has