Freedom in a Kiss

A little rusty. Haven't been writing in forever it seems. Just getting my thoughts out on paper for once. Tell me what you think!

She tastes of cigarettes,

But her kisses are like a breath of fresh air.

Every one, is a lungful of freedom.

Every embrace is like fire upon my skin.

There's so much wrong with what we're doing,

But somehow, it just feels so right.

We laugh, and smoke, and f**k.

When we are together, it's like nothing else matters;

For that moment in time, its just her and I.

Nothing but the touch oh her hand on mine is important.

The times are so brief, the moments so fleeting,

But my god, they're f*****g perfect.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think? :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Remind me of a good country song.
"We laugh, and smoke, and f**k."
Sometime a short time with laughter is better than a lifetime with sadness. I liked the positive energy and want in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

made a poetic expression through a kiss...nice work

[Melobldnfr]

Love it! A newness, almost like youth...refreshingly candid.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I felt as if this person was magical and the free spirit here
caught second hand happiness. This was a guilt free contact high.

[Dayran]

A kiss may sometimes reach very far ... into the depths of the profound ... about why we love.