Be Still, My Aching Heart

Lost love

Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

She came into my life and filled it with light,

And as quick as she came, she was gone, out of sight.

I wonder if she even knew that I could have been hers

Every time she came near, oh how butterflies started to stir.

 

Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

Her lips, so seductively red, made me melt

I wish, just once, I could have known how she felt.

Her beautiful eyes pierced right through my heart.

She made me feel pretty, but now I’m just torn apart.

 

Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

So please, just be still for me now...

Author's Note

Not my best work, but don't be shy about leaving me some reviews!

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Be still my aching heart,
For, we must live with her and I apart.
Be still my wandering mind,
There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.
 
So please, just be still for me now...


Romance at his best your words flawless over all simply brilliance...

[Tai Ryens]

Quite the sorrowful piece with a minuscule glint of hope. You may feel this way now (or maybe before, YOU are the writer after all) but you speak as if you know some day someone else will come. Which I'm sure will happen . . .
Well done.

[MusicLove93]

Thank you(:

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Very moving like a song of true desire. I loved it.

[MusicLove93]

Thank you(: