Be Still, My Aching Heart

Lost love

Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

She came into my life and filled it with light,

And as quick as she came, she was gone, out of sight.

I wonder if she even knew that I could have been hers

Every time she came near, oh how butterflies started to stir.

 

Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

Her lips, so seductively red, made me melt

I wish, just once, I could have known how she felt.

Her beautiful eyes pierced right through my heart.

She made me feel pretty, but now I’m just torn apart.

 

Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

So please, just be still for me now...

Author's Note

Not my best work, but don't be shy about leaving me some reviews!

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Be still my aching heart,
For, we must live with her and I apart.
Be still my wandering mind,
There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.
 
So please, just be still for me now...


Romance at his best your words flawless over all simply brilliance...

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice piece. Love the heart-tugging rhyme here.

[MusicLove93]

Thank you(:

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh I know this feeling all too well... very well done... the creativity in expressing your emotions is excellent.

[MusicLove93]

Thank you(:

[Sami Khalil]

Sad but lovely poem...

[MusicLove93]

Thank you(:

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

[Rhea752]

i started singing this and i started tearing up. this is so heart breakingly beautiful. i must favorite this!!

[MusicLove93]

I'm glad you like it enough to favorite it! Thank you(:

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

It tears you up doesn't it? To be apart from her... with no hope on the horizon in any direction. You keep thinking about it, obsessing over it. Such delicate, essential death.

[MusicLove93]

It really does choke me up sometimes. It's hard to get over such things sometimes.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T. Serrat]

Personally, and I'm just speaking for the way I'm wired, I don't know if we ever really get over some things; especially stuff like that. But, if you want it and you'll accept it... here's a virtual hug ({}) and all the positive energy that I can muster to go with it. Sometimes they're good to store away remember - for times like those.

[MusicLove93]

I don't think we ever do either.
Well thank you, my good sir. Virtual hugs are always welcome and accepted!

[Poetic Beauty]

Distance can change a great many things and it may hurt with longing for something to change or be different.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the repetition and the story in the poem. Hard to realize the love is finished. I like the way you ended the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MusicLove93]

Thank you(:

[Dayran]

Such intensities in the relation with another must surely feel like one is looking at a mirror and the friend who knew that about us.

[Aka.Hipster]

I absolutely(!) love this poem!
It has such a nice flow and rhythm to it that I agree it seems like song lyrics. It is a totally relatable subject and I love how tough described everything!
It is always a pleasure to read your writing!

[MusicLove93]

Thank you(:
I think I was kind of singing it when I wrote it. It seems fitting to call it a song(: