Today, You're far away

Today, You're far away

Closer than the thoughts

Closer than the memory

yet so far away.

And I don't know why

like a colorless cloud you shied

like a remorseless hawk, you flew away

I couldn't ask you why

and you just walked away

Ran away

I hoped you would shine

my morning's like the dawn herself

like her first ray

I talked to you

but just couldn't say

Today, You're far away.

Tonight, I am here, near you

Don't slip away

Don't leave me like you have

Cause I never left you in the way

Though our paths are divided now

Can I just ask you to stay?

Today, you're far away

Reviews

[Thaddius]

the subject is raw, good job on that. I think you could tone down the repetition. The 'remorseless hawk' is a cool image.