Deeper, still

To the one I care the most.

Deeper into my eyes you stare ,
Deeper still , into my heart you dare.
Passion, pleasure, the endless fire,
Deepest of all, the unbridled desire.

Deeper and deeper, we suddenly fall,
Deeper still, collapsing that wall.
Chances are taken, for lovers in need,
Deepest of all, for love to succeed.

Deeper and deeper, promises kept,
Deeper still, tears no longer wept.
Endless devotion, sacred lovers at last,
Deepest of all, sorrows lost in the past.

Deeper and deeper, true love grows,
Deeper still, only real love knows.
That unconditional love, forever holds,
Deepest of all, true happiness unfolds.

Deeper and deeper, such sweet dreams,
Deeper still, loves radiance beams.
Showers of emotion no longer unspoken,
Deepest of all, Gods greatest token.

Deeper and deeper, is my love for you,
deeper still the desire, to forever be true.
Holding so tight, embracing your heart,
Deepest of all, that we will never part.

Author's Note

Please give me some feedback ya?

Reviews

[Ryker Killian]

Deeper and Deepr is My Love For You

god that is just godly
YOUR AMAZING =^.^=

[Mica]

This is... beautiful!
The repetition and rhyme make it flow in a way that just adds to the emotions already there.
This was a pleasure to read! Great job!

[Tathiana Milla Rodrigue..]

Thank you, thank you!

[Sunni Davis]

Very emotional and very beautifully written.

[Madison A. Wright]

i love this....pure feelings and honesty of lovers at their best!! amazing poem!

thanks for sharing!

[_mal]

Very pretty poem, it flows well