Last celebration

I am living jus by looking at her in d past

First day we celebrated together,
has become
my last celebration
since then,iam jus celebrating my life with u
in my imagination
only time i laugh,i smile..
Is the time when iam in dream...
Plz dont go...plz stop there..and
I wake up with a scream...
Why i can see u only with closed eyes...
Why u disappear when this sun rise?
Though,living in today,still i look for u in my past....
You were nt d first i admit still u r d last..
I think about u,i will think about u till m dead....
I hope to see u with closed eyes
wen i would b on wooden bed

Author's Note

Suggestions invited

Reviews

[Tanya]

I liked the poem, it was great meaning, however, I would suggest that when you are writing, don't use "u" instead of you, and "r" instead of are. It is kind of important to write the full word, in any type of writing. Aside from that good job. I gave you a 90% mostly because of the shorting of words, but great creative mind.