Darket night

When u r missing sm1,whole night u cry n write

For me it has been d darkest & longest night......
But trust me,i dint started d fight....
I jus say wateva i feel...
Now,left with wounds,no1 can heal....
Strangers,frndsbestfrnds strangers....
Now destiny pushed me even farther..
Extremly sad n severly hurted,
That no1 can hurt me further.
.
Can not sleep with tears in eyes,
Jus waitng for d sun to rise..
I hope i dnt have to cry for any more nights...
Trust me,i"ll not start Any more fights

Reviews

[Deepak Sharma]

I will keep this review in my mind while writing next poem..thanx for your valuable review

[Tanya]

The poem has great meaning, but you really need to write the English language the way it should used. Shorting the words as if you are writing a text message on a cell phone, takes away a lot of power from your work, and sometimes even confuses the reader. You need to watch out for that. If you can get all the words fixed up. Trust me you will have a powerful poem here.

Just a little help on what needs to be fixed.
Strangers,frndsbestfrnds strangers -----------> Strangers, friends, best friends, strangers,
Don't use "d" ---------------> instead use, the,
din't------------> didn't,
jus -----------> just,
wateva -----------> whatever,
no1 ----------> no one,
n -----------> and
dn't -----------> don't
Any -----------> any

I hope this helped. Keep up the writing.
90% for creative writing, lost 10% for writing mistakes.

[Ghazal]

Nice but typo errors need to be fixed ;)

[Mitali Shah]

You will power makes everything possible. Good that you hoping and initiating for a fresh start. God bless