Surpass my will to live

Intellectual thoughts

My intellectual image surpasses my will of living for I will wait for a new beginning. I stomp on my own soul. for the will I choose will perch on a sharp edge of a Lime stone. The illusion would soon duplicate the way of Life for I will not only surpass but also will step a side, for a new choice that will soon emerged through the vale of tears a pond a pair of eyes.

I stand out in a crowd to be notice by a voice of reason a familiar serpent, but for some would be impossible to recognize, for this Serpent does not stand out in a crowd It hides in the shadows, so how do I become one with the crowd and not be noticed? My God will not hesitate to pick me out as a bad apple and mold me into the most delicious fruit.

Reviews

[Brittany]

I really liked this. I liked the imagery and word choice. Good message. Keep writing.