Always In the Rain

What I think about when I'm walking in the rain.

June 30, 2011

 

 

Always in the rain, my tears freely fall.

Diamonds gently gliding down my cheeks,

staining the earth with pain.

Always in the rain.

 

Always in the rain, I hear your tender voice within.

Scrambled scenes splashed behind eyes

of past memories, and wishful fantasies.

Always in the rain.

 

Always in the rain, my heart consumed

by raw emotions. Lost hopes of ever

being kissed by you in the energetic downpour.

Always in the rain.

 

Always in the rain, I think of you.

Standing alone in the soft touching drizzle,

soaked through to the skin I long for the sweet could have beens.

 

Always in the rain...  

Author's Note

Just an insight. Thanks for reading! <3

Reviews

[Liz]

This is really good :) I really liked the line "Diamonds gently gliding down my cheeks," it gave me some really vivid images. Nice write :)

[Dream Weaver]

"Blame it on the rain" ;)
a truly emotive piece
my dear xx

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this. I love this poem about rain. I could feel all of your emotions. It is a haunting piece I agree. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Ruth]

Rain is so effective when used for the emotions in poetry...this is beautifully haunting love xx

[Robin]

such are the whispers of the rain ..

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A beautiful write...........

[Kiri Nells]

Beautifully done! I love this poem, it's so genuine and heartfelt. Great write:)

[Judy Ponceby]

The repetition of Always in the rain brings a wonderful continuity and wistfulness to this. Emotions laid bare. Very well done :)

[Canicus]

Rain makes alot come out of people doesn't it. I like this, good job

[Andrew Wright]

Funny how I read this at the exact moment I'm feeling down. This is an irrefutably beautiful construct, utilizing the English language and turning blank space into a masterpiece.