Always In the Rain

What I think about when I'm walking in the rain.

June 30, 2011

 

 

Always in the rain, my tears freely fall.

Diamonds gently gliding down my cheeks,

staining the earth with pain.

Always in the rain.

 

Always in the rain, I hear your tender voice within.

Scrambled scenes splashed behind eyes

of past memories, and wishful fantasies.

Always in the rain.

 

Always in the rain, my heart consumed

by raw emotions. Lost hopes of ever

being kissed by you in the energetic downpour.

Always in the rain.

 

Always in the rain, I think of you.

Standing alone in the soft touching drizzle,

soaked through to the skin I long for the sweet could have beens.

 

Always in the rain...  

Author's Note

Just an insight. Thanks for reading! <3

Reviews

[ron]

I spent 20 years in the Army. Some times those days and nights in the field made me want some one to say those things to me. Very well done, you touched a part of me I some times forget.

[Brett Forsythe]

talent much? :)

[sharonlee]

Hauntingly poignant write.... beautifully sad....

[joshua deathdealer]

I think that I can feel raindrops...xx Excellent write....luv it.

[K.C. Zbryk]

i like the use of repitition, and when something like this happens dosent it always feel like we are in the rain? But this is very well written and and the pictures bring this to life completely. Brilliant simply brilliant

[Alexis]

This was a really beautiful poem.
"Diamons gently gliding down my cheeks,
staining the world with pain"
"Scrambled scenes splashed behind eyes"
Those were great lines. Awesome job! Keep on writing - you're really good at it. :)

[Sukriti Suki]

Wonderful....Rain, brings out the deepest emotions from within. I love how you repeat ' Always in the Rain' through out the piece....Wonderful work.

[Art Sun]

nice work....the rain can bring out those emotions and the memories...combined they make one feel ...everything

[highthought]

lot have spoke about rain and its affection on lovers, u have put it in a soft romantic clear way ,, and more u have taking me to a soft emotion