Love's Gauze

Smile.

What are you waiting for?

Smile.

It's something you should do more.

Smile.

Life's a bright little star.

Smile.

You're here so close, never too far.

Smile.

Watch the static surge.

Smile.

While I stand on the verge.

Smile.

With all your pretty teeth.

Smile.

Before I forget to breath.

Smile.

Because your love's no lost cause.

Smile.

You've mended and wrapped my broken heart with...

Love's Gauze. 

Author's Note

Well, I saw the word smile and BAM. The poem just went off in my head, tell me what you think. (:

So to me this is from male perspective, can you see that?

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Lunae,

I can with the help with the picture. I think however that really this could be taken from either perspective. This is one of those feel good love poems, and I must say I am not very good with the romance stuff. I do tend to get giggly around the pretty girls.

I think this a cute little number and it brought a smile to my face. Excellent work.

Always,

Matthew

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Lol, it made me smile! :)
I didn't really see it from just a male perspective, I saw it from either a male or female perspective. And love doesn't have to be looked at as just kissy huggy love, it could also be an intense love for a friend. That's how I first saw this poem when I read it. But now I see it can be referenced to quite a few things! I loved it! The word 'smile' being in all different colors was incredible. It was like a rainbow! It just added to the atmosphere of the poem and made it feel light and cheery! I see so much hope in this piece. I really enjoyed this! You're such a great writer! ;p

[Andrew Wright]

I can definitely see the perspective you conveyed, and again, it's a gem of a piece, a beautiful read. I feel so happy now... how infectious. I like that.

[David W Moore III]

Very nice. I'm not sure I get that it's from a male perspective. But I don't think that matters. I love the metaphor of a smile as an amelitive bandage to help heal all your hurts. The colors are happy too. Sometimes I think we all just need a pick up. Thanks.

[nono]

Pretty nice I love it! So cute! But I'm smiling now lol! Good job!

[Dream Weaver]

OK I'm smiling already :) great write.....

[Ang]

It made me smile :) I love this and how happy it is. My favorite line, "Smile.
Life's a bright little star." Great piece :)

[Cynthia]

I Love This!
The Feeling is great too!