Again. Your feelings push themselves off the page. Sometimes I wish I could feel this strongly again (although not on the negative side) sometimes the numbing and distancin from pain can affect both sides. Ahhhh. That's not your problem. Nicely done and as always thanks for baring your soul to us.
I definitely have been here... I love how your writings can be relatable (well, maybe not to everyone), yet so unique that it's always undeniably you. And that spark of yourself that shines in every line is what I find so undeniably beautiful.
This just shows how complicated all relationships can be, going from pure joy to happiness then often times ending up in the dark pits of hell. Great job.
Ahh, yes the "after effects" ARE devastating and I've always wondered how two people that were not only once friends, but in love later on, could become such total strangers. It's mind boggling. It makes one wonder why one moment can be so good, then the next, so black. With all the "relationships" I've had over the years, I still only have a a handful or two of people in my life that I trust and can call "friend", regardless of what we go through. To me "friendship" is a much deeper and more fulfilling concept than "Love". Love to fast clouds any chance of frienship. Good poem and obviously cathartic.
It's very rare that after a breakup do couples remain
friends, it happens but very rare. Sometimes it's
better that way because one or the other would
be jealous and filled with why can't we still be together?
That will never happen...I do feel you on this...
nice write....
Lets get to know each other. :) To start, I think music reveals to us the person within, so here are some of my favorite songs because of their lyrics.
Sixx A.M. - Skin
Paramore - The Only Ex.. more..