You, and I

I love to remember
         everything I have done with you.
I love to watch you dance
         across every dream, every thought.
I love to see you pass
         through my emotional fantasies.

But I absolutely hate trying to explain
how you mean the world to me,
because no words in the
entire universe
would be able to describe this thing between
You, and I.

Author's Note

Hmm, I don't know about this piece. What're your thoughts?

Reviews

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"I absolutely hate trying to explain
how you mean the world to me,
because no words in the
entire universe
would be able to describe this thing between
You, and I."

{wow-love the expression of love in this poem-superb!!!}

james:-)

[T]

Nicely done. Sometimes words escape us when we're trying to describe to someone how we feel. A look in the eyes can say more then words can instead.
Nice poem.

[heich]

love it...yehee...

[Taylor H.]

I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, loved the flow, format, style and the poem itself. You're a great poet!

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

I can so relate to this! It's like you crawled into my heart and stole the emotions inside of me (creepy Lol.) It was so beautiful. I adored it! ;p

[Dream Weaver]

My thought's we be that this is a heart warming write
filled with unexplained questions and searching for answers.
Sometimes we answer questions in our writing because it
is a safe haven. Comforting in our dreams.. Nicely done.

[Alicia™]

Love this! So beautiful. Good job! :)

[emily joe]

i really love this because i have had this feeling before. where it's such an amazing emotion that you want to capture it so bad, but nothing comes close to what you feel on the inside. that my friend, is called love (:

[A. K. MAXIMILIEN]

You kidding me, this is a wonderful poem!! I love it!! it is adorable!! very simple yet very thoughtful!!