Without You

Thanks again Joe! (:

With you I was strong,
without you I am weak.

With you nothing I did was wrong,
without you nothing reels right.

With you life was lived,
without you death caresses my every nerve.

With you fear was the night,
without you fear is my light.

With you I was scared of light,
without you I am scared of the dark.

With you I was everything including insane,
without you I am nothing but sane.

With you I was weak,
without you I am Strong.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. I liked how the ending changed at the poem. Because you said you were strong with him and weak without him. And the ending is your a weak with him and strong without him. You don't need a man to make you strong. You only need yourself. Being able to recognize that is a good thing. Thanks for sharing. Going into my favorites.

[Matthew Kult]

I like the change, sometimes we just need some time to let everything fix, sometimes that time is a few seconds. Great write.

With Love,

Jaidyn

[Andrew Wright]

A simple statement describing your heart and how you have changed... I like it, short and very sweet.

[nono]

CUTE! lol I wrote poems about love but that was for my friend she was always asking me to DX!! It was annoying so now I only do it once in a while for her LAMO! Nicely done thought this is beautiful coodo's lol!

[Forever Mine]

I agree...it took me a minute to get what you were talking about after you switched, i had to reread it. It was very good though. I havent personally gone through of this but i can only imagaine... good job

[David W Moore III]

Very nice. Took me a second to shift gears when you changed your perceptions. It seems to me that this is your progression after a breakup. At first all you can think of are the good things and you long for their return. Through time, you progress to where you realize the relationship wasn't working for a good reason and you are better off without him. Sounds healthy if that's where you were going with it. I thought it was a great use of contrast.

[Adelia Alighieri]

I like it simple. :)

[Bridget Mcmaken]

This is a very good poem. I understand where your coming from. Keep up the great work. Love the poem!

[Da devin]

Wow... nice one there. keep it up.

[Tina Kline]

The person speaking in the poem seems very confused about how they feel about this other person. Makes perfect sense because sometimes that's how relationships can go. A person has got to decide if its worth the ride or not. I think this is nicely done.