I liked this poem. I liked how the ending changed at the poem. Because you said you were strong with him and weak without him. And the ending is your a weak with him and strong without him. You don't need a man to make you strong. You only need yourself. Being able to recognize that is a good thing. Thanks for sharing. Going into my favorites.
CUTE! lol I wrote poems about love but that was for my friend she was always asking me to DX!! It was annoying so now I only do it once in a while for her LAMO! Nicely done thought this is beautiful coodo's lol!
I agree...it took me a minute to get what you were talking about after you switched, i had to reread it. It was very good though. I havent personally gone through of this but i can only imagaine... good job
Very nice. Took me a second to shift gears when you changed your perceptions. It seems to me that this is your progression after a breakup. At first all you can think of are the good things and you long for their return. Through time, you progress to where you realize the relationship wasn't working for a good reason and you are better off without him. Sounds healthy if that's where you were going with it. I thought it was a great use of contrast.
The person speaking in the poem seems very confused about how they feel about this other person. Makes perfect sense because sometimes that's how relationships can go. A person has got to decide if its worth the ride or not. I think this is nicely done.
Lets get to know each other. :) To start, I think music reveals to us the person within, so here are some of my favorite songs because of their lyrics.
Sixx A.M. - Skin
Paramore - The Only Ex.. more..