Through My Eyes

Thanks to Martina McBride's single "In My Daughter's Eyes" I have written this song for my Ma. <3 ya Ma (:

Since the day of my birth I have been your miracle,

intelligent,
nice,
well-mannered,
overall, perfect.

As a toddler I was the twinkle in your eyes,

always making your heart smile,
giving you hope and strength,
helping you through a life without dad.

Through my eyes you gave me strength.

Being a teenager is simple.

I love to amaze you with things such as this.       
I love to watch you with your one true love,
hoping one day I'll have the same thing.

Through my eyes you gave me wings.

Though someday soon I'll be all grown-up, I want you to recall you,

whispered life into me,
revealed things I had never seen,        
helped me create My Dreams.

Through my eyes you gave me the Breathe of Life.
 

Author's Note

I love it the way it is! But I would still love to hear what you have to say.(:

Reviews

[deeps]

This is amazing, i like this write alot.

[zendikar]

wow what a deep and heartfelt poem great job you write great!

[emily joe]

I really loved this. You're an excellent writer.

[Ryzo]

A poem from the depths of your core, the ocean with motion. Well done!

[A. K. MAXIMILIEN]

"Through my eyes" what a wonderful name for a poem. The poem is simply beautiful :)

[Kiddx]

This is really well written and so much emotion. I like this alot.

[Taylor H.]

This is amazing. Dont change a thing :)

[larryb]

Very well done..likes this a lot :)

[Dream Weaver]

Beautiful write sincerly from the heart
a wonderful ode....nicely done.

[J.S. Pua]

i kind of like your format and style..
nice poem..