Burst

Burst

A Poem by Kate

Flying backwards
Full power
No resistance
No violence
Into a womb
Colliding and
Bursting into a shower
Of light so bright
Like an opalescent diamond
Like a pearl
Inside the mussel's mouth

Diverting rays
Swishing into space
No hesitance
No condolence
Silence that never ends
Peace and Unity
Cradled in the Heaven's hands
The birth of purity
Has commenced

© 2022 Kate


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I like this a lot Kate you let yr imagination run wild with the vivid Word Pictures and Magic. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kate

1 Year Ago

Thank you 🙏
Has the sound of a mystical experience or a good psychedelic trip. On the other hand, "flying backward" sounds like a past life regression. Whatever, the state described is something we all seek in this life, but which relatively few ever find.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kate

1 Year Ago

Interesting perception. Thank you 💕
Pearl in a mussel yeah I like that so much. Way cool.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kate

1 Year Ago

Thank you 💕
Very nicely pictured words. Nice message too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kate

1 Year Ago

Thank you 💕
Amazing flow of thoughts dear Kate. The poem took the reader to the ending.
"Peace and Unity
Cradled in the Heaven's hands
The birth of purity
Has commenced"
I pray for the same and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kate

1 Year Ago

Thank you 🙏
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear poet.
That was really cool. Perfect title for this piece as well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kate

1 Year Ago

Thank you 🙏

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Kate
Kate

Czech Republic



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I come from the Czech Republic. I've been studying English for several years (I am just about to finish my studies). I started writing "poetry" that doesn't rhyme in Czech, but one day I lapsed into E.. more..

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