Love through Dentistry

I am like the feather

Dangling on the review mirror

Probing your eyes

Tickling your shoulder

Sawing your gums

Sewing your weakening power

 

I am like a yogin

Lotusing on a saucer

I am like a wizard

Sandwiched between two trees

Like a sausage

Wedged between your knees

Whose runny mustard of belief

Has decreased

Into minus degrees

 

Clinging of dirty dishes

Cracking of loosened teeth

Trays abundant in autoclaves

Heavily laden with instruments

Sogged with blood and pain

Torture squeaking like tyres

-  Out from hand-pieced drilling 

Of dentists' wicked feelings

Into cavities of 

Their seated victims

-  Out from the insides 

Of opening mouths 

Wider and wider...

...Make my fluid boil

Like a dead salmon

Burning in an aluminium foil

 

A blade of grass

Is surfing on the ripples

Ruffled by my naked arse

Similarly like you used to

Drive your tongue

In licking motions

On my bony paths

A blade of razor

Is scolding my scalp

Scooping out a fluff of hair

Like scraping an omelette

Out from a hissing pan

 

And I am draining my blood

From pulsing vessels as...

To summon platelets

To heal our scabs

To close all the gaps

To bridge archipelagos

To build cornerstones

Of our own home...

And to unplug

Blunt tips of dentistry

Sharpening your tongue

Into a dishonest tapestry

 

Reviews

[...]

Your style have very good work with works. It s like walking on the same street and still find something new. Desrcibe at details is very good. There is kind of sad mood. I hope at future you will write something more happier. But anyway i like you poems.

[Kate]

Thank you! Gosh, that´s great feedback :) My poems are mostly melancholic, as I am. But try to read Cheers :)

[...]

Righti will. I am just little tired from sad poems. Cause almost everybody have sad poems. I just wish i can read something more cheerful. But it s great poem anyway

[Kate]

poetry has always been more melancholic I think than cheerful. I think mainly poems for kids are cheerful :) I sometimes write funny things, not too often though.

[...]

all right. I think i am still child. But i have to confess at my past. I also write quiet sad poems. Strange things happen. When i start write more cheerful. Also my life became cheerful.

[Kate]

It´s very interconnected I think. It all depends on how ppl feel. I don´t think though that if I start writing positively, it will have an impact on me. Maybe I should try it :)