Null and Void

Null and Void

 

 

 

the gravity

of your words

weigh upon me

like snow

on redwood trees.

 

you stifle

my resolve

with silence…

a droning hum

that extinguishes

the breath of me.

 

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

Impactful indeed. Short lines, imagery and tone all captured here. I sense a pain but also a strength in the Redwood Tree.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Troy. I love your analogy. Nice to meet you!

[Einstein Noodle]

toxic relationships ... yep ... they really do exist unfortunately .. the somber mood one might be in on the cusp of making a healthy decision to get out of Dodge .. i think this is a strong emotive poem .. universal and relatable
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hello, Gene! It's been a while. I've missed you, my friend. Hope all is well!

[Robert Trakofler]

nothing comes across as beautiful as so few words saying so many things such as this the imagery and the feelings are wonderful :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Very much appreciate your being here, Robert. Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

An intensely beautiful, romantic poem. The mention of Redwood is wonderful.
Just the right words.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you dear Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Kelley.

[MCS]

Lovely imagery beautifully paired with your exquisite words, allowing the reader to feel this pain. Yet the tall, strong redwood offers a glimpse that one can survive.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Beautiful analogy of the redwood. Endearing review. Thank you, Mary.

[Coyote Poetry]

Silence words can be so meaningful. I believe too many words, we do not need. I liked the meaning thoughts in the poetry. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, John!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly.

[Ken e Bujold]

such words as these ... I doubt anyone could ever stifle your keenly tuned voice K

:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you, Ken! It's been a while. Good to see you!

[Ken e Bujold]

yes. was on an extended vacation in Singapore, Nov until just before Xmas. then just after I got back was hit by a car while out walking (thankfully no broken bones, but tissue injury limited the amount of time I could sit without discomfort) so writing was painful, and limited.

Hope all well with u my dear

[Kelly Scheppers]

Ken, I am so sorry to hear about your accident. I fully understand about the limited amount you can sit without pain or discomfort. I'm just glad you're ok! Take care. Your presence is always welcomed here!

[Dave]

Sounds like someone you might want to avoid.
Someone who would rather tear you down than build you up

Take care Kelly, you should be built up.- Dave

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you most kindly, Dave!

[Dylan Macadham]

Ah, yes, I sometimes wish I were more like your protagonist. Life would be so simple not giving a damn about others. ...but damnit, it's just not in me :) ... Good write!

[Kelly Scheppers]

A love that was deceived has a tendency to give your heartbreak a voice. Thank you for hearing mine!

[Dylan Macadham]

... Sadly, I guess heartbreak is something we all have in common.