A Jubilation of Quietude

A Jubilation of Quietude

 

 

 

sated in this humble abode

witness to rivulets of rain

minuscule orbs,

falling

plummeting

trickling  downward

into translucent pools

from a windows chill,

arresting my gaze  

my ardent stare

with a jubilation of quietude.

 

 

Reviews

[Twilight]

"a jubilation of quietitude", sometimes just what we need; when wanting a bit of down time or solitude. And, if raining outside; it can sometimes force the issue (so to speak)! Indeed, what better time, when confined indoors; to focus upon and appreciate "rivulets of rain"? I noticed, how the writer has sought to express, both how falling rain looks; and can naturally change shape before our watchful eyes.! Keep writing. I accept "read requests" too, as I often remind people.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I truly appreciate your presence here. Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the rain dear Kelly. Create a meditation for the mind. Hello dear friend and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I adored how you used the language.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

So flattered! Thank you most kindly, John!

[Vol]

Kelly,
I once built a chicken coop and had it all done except the door. I was out there with hammer, say screwdriver and was trapped by a violent thunderstorm. We lived on top of a mountain, so I was actually INSIDE the clouds when the lightning came with simultaneous thunder, but my cozy little shelter became a jubilation of quietude...
mmm... I love the sensuality of you images...
Vol

[Kelly Scheppers]

Ahh, thank you so much, Vol! I'm thrilled it conjured up a memory for you, and appreciate the compliment more than you know.