A Novice to Art

A Novice to Art

 

 

 

i was a novice to art

he was an amateur at best

stroking my scars and imperfections

with the highbrowed demeanor

of a scholar.

 

our conversation was sparse

indulging in the contrast of shadow and light,

as he gathered his tools

in preparation

like a priest in benediction.

 

catching my breath i looked away

trying hard not to gaze upon

the smile behind his probing eyes,

the low brimmed fedora

that brought his chiseled features

into close proximity.

 

he encircled my  anatomy

like a lioness in a cage,

pointing my chin towards my left shoulder

capturing ribbons of braided sunlight

in the tendrils of upswept hair.

 

i took another breath,  exhaled

my gown descended to the floor

in a diaphanous pool

 

a novice to art.

Reviews

[Twilight]

Interesting, with some good word usage. It brought to mind a scenario in which, a woman and man meet in the context of an artistic pursuit of some kind. Perhaps, in the same dance group or an orchestra? Anyway, because the woman is possibly kind of new to all this, as a "novice"; it creates a barrier or tensions between herself and the guy she has eyes for? However, the guy is probably a snob; and doesn't know what he might be missing.! If he appreciated the woman enough, then her novice status in art; would not deter him! He seems to like her physical beauty, as is clearly suggested in verse four? Anyway, this is probably the best work which I have read by this authoress; so far.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A mighty perceptive insight! Thank you!

[Twilight]

Well, I admit that I made a few intuitive guesses; as part of that insight. I genuinely think it's probably your best piece of writing, which I have seen; so far.

[WGSHASSERE]

Interesting. A female model experiencing her first, or one of her first nude posing opportunities. A novice artist’s first adventure into the human form. Both experiencing a new journey into art as seen through different eyes. I’m not a big fan of excessive adjectives. However, that’s just me. Enjoyed reading. You accomplished what I enjoy in reading various works, the you gave me an image that I see, that I feel, that i remember. I’m new to Writer’s Cafe. Thank you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a pleasure it is having you here! Welcome to the WC!

[Chris]

Hi Kell. I came by to visit. You found a pic that really suited the words and the thoughts. Life from the model's view.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am thrilled to see you, old friend. We've been here so long I believe we are fixtures! Lol, good to be in the pleasure of your company, Chris. Many thanks!

[Soren]

This write is a mixture of romantic, seductive, artistic and metaphoric. Lovely

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you most kindly, Soren!

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Dearest Kelly 🎨 ⚤

There is nothing I cherish more than coming back to You, following a prolonged hiatus away. This is said in an effort to convince you of the deeply joyous elation in your ever expanding amelioration of mastered prowess, donning a poetic pen, I feel all the way into my ever-smitten bones.
Ya know, concerning this piece(?), I perceive it in two distinct settings: One, with light humor, where the novice nude artist's model 🎨 is posing and being set-up by her scholarly pretentious, amateur artist. The other, a sensually stimulating moment shared between two inexperienced lovers ⚤ … both of whom wish to be considered sexually sophisticated, in which Nature takes due course after considerable enticing foreplay (stroking scars 'n imperfections, indulging in the contrast of shadow and light, and the like); whereafter, her "gown descended to the floor in a diaphanous pool." Sheer verbal magic, Poetess … scheesh!

No one, Dear Kelly, does poetic diction with the verve, originality, and class You do … succulent sensuality with just a tactile pinch enough deliciously discreet porno to set one's imaginative libido spinning and left melting into its socks.
On the other hand, I genuinely enjoy this playful smile, aroused by images of the hopeful, clueless model and pretentiously adept artist.

I can almost hear you snickering at my bumbling guesses; ah, well, some things never change … LOL!
Either way, M'Dear, beautifully done, as usual!
You never cease to amaze my senses … happy hugs 'n smiles! ⁓ Richard🖌

[that gorgeous artwork sure would make a thrilling statement displayed atop this sweet masterpiece]
150/100

[Kelly Scheppers]

However am I to catch my breath after indulging in such a delicious review? Wow, I am flattered beyond words, immersed in the wonder that is you! Thank you, my dear, dear friend! xo

[Richard🖌]

I suppose we've know one another long enough for me to be a bit personal, eh?
Er, to leave such a personal review.
And, talk about flattered … I'm all a'blush! ; )

[John the Baptist]

Sounds like you were also a novice to seduction. Could have had a better instructor, though.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, John. How are you?

[John the Baptist]

So. far, so good.

[Ken Simm.]

This is sensuous and romantic, gossamer and yet full of wit and intelligence. Sexy without being obvious. And speaking of you I don't agree that you are an amateur. And this is proof that you are not. Brilliant piece of writing.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I will bask in the glow of this review whenever I question my ability to challenge myself to become a better poet. Growth is of most importance to me, as is the validation of those I admire. Thank you most kindly, Ken!

[Tumi]

So so romantic. Very good

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Tumi!

[Sami Khalil]

Well, awesome! Both are learning their art form, their position, their likes and dislikes.
It builds the tension till the last ending; keeps the reader anticipating something.
Awesome!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for the smile you always leave me with, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Kelley!

[Re-Pete]

phenomenal descriptions of the experience of posing nude for an artist. i imagine that's exactly how it feels and is. you've got the entire package here from title on down. i don't see how it could get much better than this. simply wonderful poetry much enjoyed and appreciated. top notch for sure. bravo.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Pete, my man, you are always a most welcomed sight to see. Thank you, my patriot friend!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Amateur perhaps...novice yes...BUT. This is an artist who captures reality and presents it rather than trying to cover it up with brush strokes.
He paints the real person....and she allows him to show her in all her glory, including the flaws.
The story told in this poem really moved me....

and I remember sitting for an art class...not nude....but as I am....some captured the humanness so well....others took liberties to make their drawings perfect. I am far from perfect and appreciated the reality drawings of me.
the depth of the person you are always comes through in your poetry.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I made a vow to myself as a poet, to always better myself as a writer. And I try to learn, and absorb as much as I can to achieve that. Thank you for this inspiring review, Jacob. Your words, kindness and friendship are deeply valued!