A Novice to Art

A Novice to Art

 

 

 

i was a novice to art

he was an amateur at best

stroking my scars and imperfections

with the highbrowed demeanor

of a scholar.

 

our conversation was sparse

indulging in the contrast of shadow and light,

as he gathered his tools

in preparation

like a priest in benediction.

 

catching my breath i looked away

trying hard not to gaze upon

the smile behind his probing eyes,

the low brimmed fedora

that brought his chiseled features

into close proximity.

 

he encircled my  anatomy

like a lioness in a cage,

pointing my chin towards my left shoulder

capturing ribbons of braided sunlight

in the tendrils of upswept hair.

 

i took another breath,  exhaled

my gown descended to the floor

in a diaphanous pool

 

a novice to art.

Reviews

[Twilight]

Interesting, with some good word usage. It brought to mind a scenario in which, a woman and man meet in the context of an artistic pursuit of some kind. Perhaps, in the same dance group or an orchestra? Anyway, because the woman is possibly kind of new to all this, as a "novice"; it creates a barrier or tensions between herself and the guy she has eyes for? However, the guy is probably a snob; and doesn't know what he might be missing.! If he appreciated the woman enough, then her novice status in art; would not deter him! He seems to like her physical beauty, as is clearly suggested in verse four? Anyway, this is probably the best work which I have read by this authoress; so far.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A mighty perceptive insight! Thank you!

[Twilight]

Well, I admit that I made a few intuitive guesses; as part of that insight. I genuinely think it's probably your best piece of writing, which I have seen; so far.

[Ken Simm.]

This is sensuous and romantic, gossamer and yet full of wit and intelligence. Sexy without being obvious. And speaking of you I don't agree that you are an amateur. And this is proof that you are not. Brilliant piece of writing.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I will bask in the glow of this review whenever I question my ability to challenge myself to become a better poet. Growth is of most importance to me, as is the validation of those I admire. Thank you most kindly, Ken!

[tumi]

So so romantic. Very good

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Tumi!

[Sami Khalil]

Well, awesome! Both are learning their art form, their position, their likes and dislikes.
It builds the tension till the last ending; keeps the reader anticipating something.
Awesome!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for the smile you always leave me with, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Kelley!

[Pete]

phenomenal descriptions of the experience of posing nude for an artist. i imagine that's exactly how it feels and is. you've got the entire package here from title on down. i don't see how it could get much better than this. simply wonderful poetry much enjoyed and appreciated. top notch for sure. bravo.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Pete, my man, you are always a most welcomed sight to see. Thank you, my patriot friend!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Amateur perhaps...novice yes...BUT. This is an artist who captures reality and presents it rather than trying to cover it up with brush strokes.
He paints the real person....and she allows him to show her in all her glory, including the flaws.
The story told in this poem really moved me....

and I remember sitting for an art class...not nude....but as I am....some captured the humanness so well....others took liberties to make their drawings perfect. I am far from perfect and appreciated the reality drawings of me.
the depth of the person you are always comes through in your poetry.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I made a vow to myself as a poet, to always better myself as a writer. And I try to learn, and absorb as much as I can to achieve that. Thank you for this inspiring review, Jacob. Your words, kindness and friendship are deeply valued!

[elgarcia]

Hii! I'm a rookie writer and I want a few people to read and support my story and first story I've published! Its okay if you guys don't want to read it but its ok!! I loved the poetry and rhyming of this masterpiece, I'd gladly want to learn from my elders like this person! - Written by young writer, el :D

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Elgarcia! Always thrilled to garnish a new reader. Welcome to the WC!

[Stella Armour]

Just brilliant Kelly, the imagery is superb !

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you most kindly, Stella!

[MsJewel]

How I've missed reading you Kelly. Your poetry is a work of art. Lovely. :) Julie

[Kelly Scheppers]

JULIE!!! Is it really you? My, my, what a thrill it is to see you. Thank you, my long lost friend!

[MsJewel]

Kelly! I'm thrilled to be back and read your wonderful poetry again. Thanks for the warm welcome! Julie

[redzone]

such erotic intentions written here Kelly. The softness of these words, the slow seduction of touch, Kelly, you are no novice to art or to making the reader feel alive. Please, I fell. Just let me lie here and savor this poem.

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a lovely thought you leave me with. Thank you, Curt!