A Novice to Art

A Novice to Art

 

 

 

i was a novice to art

he was an amateur at best

stroking my scars and imperfections

with the highbrowed demeanor

of a scholar.

 

our conversation was sparse

indulging in the contrast of shadow and light,

as he gathered his tools

in preparation

like a priest in benediction.

 

catching my breath i looked away

trying hard not to gaze upon

the smile behind his probing eyes,

the low brimmed fedora

that brought his chiseled features

into close proximity.

 

he encircled my  anatomy

like a lioness in a cage,

pointing my chin towards my left shoulder

capturing ribbons of braided sunlight

in the tendrils of upswept hair.

 

i took another breath,  exhaled

my gown descended to the floor

in a diaphanous pool

 

a novice to art.

Reviews

[Twilight]

Interesting, with some good word usage. It brought to mind a scenario in which, a woman and man meet in the context of an artistic pursuit of some kind. Perhaps, in the same dance group or an orchestra? Anyway, because the woman is possibly kind of new to all this, as a "novice"; it creates a barrier or tensions between herself and the guy she has eyes for? However, the guy is probably a snob; and doesn't know what he might be missing.! If he appreciated the woman enough, then her novice status in art; would not deter him! He seems to like her physical beauty, as is clearly suggested in verse four? Anyway, this is probably the best work which I have read by this authoress; so far.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A mighty perceptive insight! Thank you!

[Twilight]

Well, I admit that I made a few intuitive guesses; as part of that insight. I genuinely think it's probably your best piece of writing, which I have seen; so far.

[C. M. Miller]

I FEEL, I SEE, no novice in the poem, or from the pen, but reality in life, or from imagination? Which came first, or does it matter? Through the years Kelly, either you created the poetic moment, or you lived it, first.
Through the years of reading you, I can never tell. Quite frankly, I never want to know.

[Daz]

'A Novice to Art. ' I really enjoyed this poem.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Daz. Much appreciate it!

[Daz]

You're very welcome.

[Trace]

This is a wonderful description of seduction.
Written in only the way a poet can.
I must admit, l am smitten.

Huggs, Trace.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Gee Trace, I don't think anyone has ever been "smitten" with what I wrote. I love it! Thank you!

[Trace]

It almost sounds like l read it before l wrote my latest. (I didn't) it's always a true pleasure to read you.
Huggs, T.

[Perdition]

See, I read these poems of yours and begin to count the turns around the knot in the hangman's rope...beauty is a word that compels madness in its inabilities. Should I praise the author or her muse or should I just enjoy the images and twirl the paintbrush in my hand? A thousand ways to say you rock but none suffice. How 'bout I just sip on this hemlock wine...how's that? Thank you Kelly~

[Kelly Scheppers]

I hope you know how very much I appreciate this, Joseph. Thank you!

[Betty Hermelee]

Hi Kelly
You painted an awesome scene of how artistic talent meets desire… words perfectly thought out and beautifully drawn
Warmly
b
B🌷

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Betty! Always a pleasure!

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Kelly
Warmly, B

[WGSHASSERE]

Interesting. A female model experiencing her first, or one of her first nude posing opportunities. A novice artist’s first adventure into the human form. Both experiencing a new journey into art as seen through different eyes. I’m not a big fan of excessive adjectives. However, that’s just me. Enjoyed reading. You accomplished what I enjoy in reading various works, the you gave me an image that I see, that I feel, that i remember. I’m new to Writer’s Cafe. Thank you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a pleasure it is having you here! Welcome to the WC!

[Chris]

Hi Kell. I came by to visit. You found a pic that really suited the words and the thoughts. Life from the model's view.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am thrilled to see you, old friend. We've been here so long I believe we are fixtures! Lol, good to be in the pleasure of your company, Chris. Many thanks!

[Soren]

This write is a mixture of romantic, seductive, artistic and metaphoric. Lovely

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you most kindly, Soren!

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Dearest Kelly 🎨 ⚤

There is nothing I cherish more than coming back to You, following a prolonged hiatus away. This is said in an effort to convince you of the deeply joyous elation in your ever expanding amelioration of mastered prowess, donning a poetic pen, I feel all the way into my ever-smitten bones.
Ya know, concerning this piece(?), I perceive it in two distinct settings: One, with light humor, where the novice nude artist's model 🎨 is posing and being set-up by her scholarly pretentious, amateur artist. The other, a sensually stimulating moment shared between two inexperienced lovers ⚤ … both of whom wish to be considered sexually sophisticated, in which Nature takes due course after considerable enticing foreplay (stroking scars 'n imperfections, indulging in the contrast of shadow and light, and the like); whereafter, her "gown descended to the floor in a diaphanous pool." Sheer verbal magic, Poetess … scheesh!

No one, Dear Kelly, does poetic diction with the verve, originality, and class You do … succulent sensuality with just a tactile pinch enough deliciously discreet porno to set one's imaginative libido spinning and left melting into its socks.
On the other hand, I genuinely enjoy this playful smile, aroused by images of the hopeful, clueless model and pretentiously adept artist.

I can almost hear you snickering at my bumbling guesses; ah, well, some things never change … LOL!
Either way, M'Dear, beautifully done, as usual!
You never cease to amaze my senses … happy hugs 'n smiles! ⁓ Richard🖌

[that gorgeous artwork sure would make a thrilling statement displayed atop this sweet masterpiece]
150/100

[Kelly Scheppers]

However am I to catch my breath after indulging in such a delicious review? Wow, I am flattered beyond words, immersed in the wonder that is you! Thank you, my dear, dear friend! xo

[Richard🖌]

I suppose we've know one another long enough for me to be a bit personal, eh?
Er, to leave such a personal review.
And, talk about flattered … I'm all a'blush! ; )

[John the Baptist]

Sounds like you were also a novice to seduction. Could have had a better instructor, though.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, John. How are you?

[John the Baptist]

So. far, so good.