A Novice to Art

A Novice to Art

 

 

 

i was a novice to art

he was an amateur at best

stroking my scars and imperfections

with the highbrowed demeanor

of a scholar.

 

our conversation was sparse

indulging in the contrast of shadow and light,

as he gathered his tools

in preparation

like a priest in benediction.

 

catching my breath i looked away

trying hard not to gaze upon

the smile behind his probing eyes,

the low brimmed fedora

that brought his chiseled features

into close proximity.

 

he encircled my  anatomy

like a lioness in a cage,

pointing my chin towards my left shoulder

capturing ribbons of braided sunlight

in the tendrils of upswept hair.

 

i took another breath,  exhaled

my gown descended to the floor

in a diaphanous pool

 

a novice to art.

Reviews

[Twilight]

Interesting, with some good word usage. It brought to mind a scenario in which, a woman and man meet in the context of an artistic pursuit of some kind. Perhaps, in the same dance group or an orchestra? Anyway, because the woman is possibly kind of new to all this, as a "novice"; it creates a barrier or tensions between herself and the guy she has eyes for? However, the guy is probably a snob; and doesn't know what he might be missing.! If he appreciated the woman enough, then her novice status in art; would not deter him! He seems to like her physical beauty, as is clearly suggested in verse four? Anyway, this is probably the best work which I have read by this authoress; so far.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A mighty perceptive insight! Thank you!

[Twilight]

Well, I admit that I made a few intuitive guesses; as part of that insight. I genuinely think it's probably your best piece of writing, which I have seen; so far.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

so what's the story behind this poem?
my first thought was you were modeling for a painter, but then i thought maybe you are getting a tattoo. however, what's important isn't what is happening but the relationship between the persona and the artist. 'our conversation was sparse' and 'trying hard not to gaze upon / the smile behind his probing eyes,' were great lines that say a lot without giving too much away. so i merely ask my question out of curiosity.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Sorry, no juicy story to reveal. It was pure conjecture on my part. Thank you for your curiosity!

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

it's cool. i'm not disappointed xD

[Neville]

Virgin on perfection if you ask me .. this is so bloomin cool it is HOT .. I take my Stetson off to ya Kelly .. actually, I don't have a Stetson, I've only been married the once and to the same gall and we have a total of two .. anyway, I digress, I take my cap off to you and truly .. Neville

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Nev! I'll give you a tip of my fedora, my friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the use of art and touch dear Kelly. I agree. love should be like art. We should paint with hands and kiss. Pleasure and joy. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry. I did like.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

So happy to see you, John. Thank you so much. Many blessings, my friend!

[Lorry]

We were all novices at one point Kelly. At least that's what I tell myself when I miss the holder with my thingy... paintbrush, which usually ends in a splodge mess and a woman saying "well I'm not cleaning that up!"
Sometimes I only notice I've messed up when I'm left sleeping in the wet bit...from where my paintbrush landed on the bed and not in its holster!
Now, that's enough euphemisms me thinks, so all that's left to say is nicely captured piece and I'll try my best not to make such a mess next time!
😃

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are a wonder to behold, Lorry! Thank you for the smiles you bring!

[C. M. Miller]

I FEEL, I SEE, no novice in the poem, or from the pen, but reality in life, or from imagination? Which came first, or does it matter? Through the years Kelly, either you created the poetic moment, or you lived it, first.
Through the years of reading you, I can never tell. Quite frankly, I never want to know.

[Daz]

'A Novice to Art. ' I really enjoyed this poem.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Daz. Much appreciate it!

[Daz]

You're very welcome.

[Trace]

This is a wonderful description of seduction.
Written in only the way a poet can.
I must admit, l am smitten.

Huggs, Trace.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Gee Trace, I don't think anyone has ever been "smitten" with what I wrote. I love it! Thank you!

[Trace]

It almost sounds like l read it before l wrote my latest. (I didn't) it's always a true pleasure to read you.
Huggs, T.

[Perdition]

See, I read these poems of yours and begin to count the turns around the knot in the hangman's rope...beauty is a word that compels madness in its inabilities. Should I praise the author or her muse or should I just enjoy the images and twirl the paintbrush in my hand? A thousand ways to say you rock but none suffice. How 'bout I just sip on this hemlock wine...how's that? Thank you Kelly~

[Kelly Scheppers]

I hope you know how very much I appreciate this, Joseph. Thank you!

[Betty Hermelee]

Hi Kelly
You painted an awesome scene of how artistic talent meets desire… words perfectly thought out and beautifully drawn
Warmly
b
B🌷

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Betty! Always a pleasure!

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Kelly
Warmly, B

[WGSHASSERE]

Interesting. A female model experiencing her first, or one of her first nude posing opportunities. A novice artist’s first adventure into the human form. Both experiencing a new journey into art as seen through different eyes. I’m not a big fan of excessive adjectives. However, that’s just me. Enjoyed reading. You accomplished what I enjoy in reading various works, the you gave me an image that I see, that I feel, that i remember. I’m new to Writer’s Cafe. Thank you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a pleasure it is having you here! Welcome to the WC!