Although most of the country is enduring a heat wave at present, my muse opted for cooler temperatures. It’s my birthday today, and this is my present to share!
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you really captured that depressing feeling of walking through a snowed-out area. we have biting cold and snowfall in parts of japan too, although i have heard it is much colder in the midwest. i hope this coming winter will be merciful to you. and i look forward to reading more of your work.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
I never imagined Japan having snowfall. Thank you for your compliments, Ern. Truly a pleasure having.. read moreI never imagined Japan having snowfall. Thank you for your compliments, Ern. Truly a pleasure having you here! Stay warm!
Here in Michigan. A Indian Summer. 80 degrees in Michigan. Last year in my area of Michigan. One snow storm. The weather is changing. I understand missing the silence of snow. I was station in the Army in California, Texas and Georgia for 15 years. Hello dear friend and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
The weather is changing, but there's just something about the silence of a snowfall, that nothing el.. read moreThe weather is changing, but there's just something about the silence of a snowfall, that nothing else quite compares. Thank you, John!
First: A VERY BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY KELLY!!!
Second: you gave yourself a wonderful gift, a poem of warmth and comfort, not to mention cuddled next to your lover.
I enjoyed the warmth I got from reading your poem Kelly. Thanks for sharing!!
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
Thank you so much, Curt! Please keep in touch!
2 Months Ago
I want to keep coming here on a regular basis. I have missed reading your poetry and others as well... read moreI want to keep coming here on a regular basis. I have missed reading your poetry and others as well. Sorry that I was gone for so long.
And Kelly, yes I will keep in touch. Thanks for being you!!
The bite to the bone chill of winter is beautifully crafted in this finely penned narrative poem. Stunning visual detail, I love the picture you have painted through your words of the birds taking shade in the thick branches of the Norway Spruce and how you covered up with a beautiful goose down duvet to keep the cold out while sleeping. A beautiful poetic work of art, Kelly. Thank you so very much for sharing. Belated "Happy Birthday!" wishes. I hope you enjoyed a wonderful day and I wish you a very blessed and happy wonderful year ahead too. Enjoy!
Indeed.! This write seems to capture a certain means, to tackle the bitter chill of winter weather; no doubt. With the warmth of bodily heat.! Anyone who lives through the coldest of seasons, could probably relate to this. Thanks for sharing the sentiments.
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
I love winter. It's expressed a lot in my poetry! Thank you for your review!
A wonderful present! I feel the chill and see the pleasing contrast of red feathers huddled in the evergreen branches with cotton coats of snow, bodies in their fetal snug hibernation, both warm and familiar as home. Enticing as rare and softly placed this poem goes from harsh to the letter of sweetness so astonishingly quick and rare as to almost compare it to an Oliver ..though I wouldn't dare. This is pure "Kelly" and deserves such a distinction,...I wonder if we're feeling a brutal winter perhaps headed our way? So sorry to have missed your birthday dear friend, Happy Belated!
Posted 3 Months Ago
3 Months Ago
Thank you so much, Joseph. Your presence here is a gift to me.
Happy Belated Birthday my dearest Kelly🎂❣️something told me to visit you today and so I join in to send wishes for a wonderful birthday & year ahead.Hope u are happy and well. A shout out sent from Pebs to Ollie too of course!
Thank you for this literary gift! Your lovely crystalline words in this wintry write are so evocative and wrap the reader in a blanket of comfort. Yes I had to lookup “brumal”- thanks for teaching me a new word! Love blessings and light sent to you😘xo
Posted 3 Months Ago
3 Months Ago
This instantly became one of my personal favorites within minutes of writing it. I've always had a .. read moreThis instantly became one of my personal favorites within minutes of writing it. I've always had a penchant for winter, and that little bird in the avatar brought it all into focus for me. And the added thrill of discovering a new word...was priceless! Your presence is always the gift that keeps on giving, my friend. Always! x
Kelly - it's been a while since I've been here. You made me glad to have come back. Despite the winter's cold you make it seem so comfy to snuggle under the goose down quilt.
Take care - Dave
Posted 4 Months Ago
4 Months Ago
Life happens, Dave. It gets the best of our time, no matter our best of intentions to keep in touch.. read moreLife happens, Dave. It gets the best of our time, no matter our best of intentions to keep in touch. It is always a pleasure having you my page. Thank you!
Kelly, "My Kelly!" How few your words warms my thoughts and makes me jealous for a fleece comforter to share; "winter's bone," nay!
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
I should have put a fireplace in that house, huh? But it's so much fun getting warm together! Thank.. read moreI should have put a fireplace in that house, huh? But it's so much fun getting warm together! Thank you my dear Charles!
5 Months Ago
An Embasy cocktail 🍸 or two would certainly keep the fire glowing.