Dreamy moments... lovers caressing each other with words - which live beyond the lives of their authors. Your poem flows easily and wastes no words; it holds together well in its structure and poise. Intensely enjoyable.
[I only wrote this for the foot rub, lol]
Posted 8 Months Ago
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8 Months Ago
Lol, I love it!! You may go to the front of the line, Jibey. Thank you for noticing!
dear Kelly.. of all the Poetry to ever read… this Poem is Indeed the Hideaway of Romantic Bliss … softly, Pat
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
I'm so thrilled you enjoyed my first offering of the new year. It took me a while, but I finally go.. read moreI'm so thrilled you enjoyed my first offering of the new year. It took me a while, but I finally got my mojo back! Thanks so much, Pat!
8 Months Ago
dear Kelly .. you are an Angel soaring … softly, Pat
BTW... I began my marriage to Kimberly by reading "The Song of Solomon" every night. After that I ra.. read moreBTW... I began my marriage to Kimberly by reading "The Song of Solomon" every night. After that I rad her to sleep every night until she died...
8 Months Ago
What a lucky lady! So sorry you lost her, but you do know she's still with you!
Simply wonderful, Kelly!! Poetry by dead men surely does stand the test of time, doesn't it? As always, you spice it up with a bit of romance. So good to read you. Lydi**
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
I think you and I have stood the test of time, Lydi. When I look back on our Starlite years, I fond.. read moreI think you and I have stood the test of time, Lydi. When I look back on our Starlite years, I fondly remember Albert and Tess and friends like you. Thank you for always having my back!
8 Months Ago
Yes Starlite was a great site…until it wasn’t. Glad we are still writing!
And now we have a perfect Sunday read to erm...Read and get all poetilical as we watch the fog swirl and the snowflakes fall and maybe I should have put on more than my penguin oesie to read this. Either that or not decide to read this until I came down the ladder and finish cleaning my windows! ☺
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
Lol, thank you so much, Lorry! Now, I have visions of you in a penguin onesie dancing in my head. .. read moreLol, thank you so much, Lorry! Now, I have visions of you in a penguin onesie dancing in my head. ; )
8 Months Ago
Well, more like wobbling than dancing these days, but I can still shake my a*s....in the same way a .. read moreWell, more like wobbling than dancing these days, but I can still shake my a*s....in the same way a jelly will wobble! ☺
And what better way to keep the winter chill away, snuff, safe, whilst in lauded company, listening to iconic poetry of past poets, read by the one we love, yep, sure warms the heart as an aura of romance precipitates cosy surroundings ...
' the afternoon was well spent,
like Hemingway’s fisherman was to the sea
my heart became a voyager
to the past
as winter was no more an intrusion
with an accumulation of snow
as he read to me
poetry by dead men '
Inspiring
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
Poetry will always be my sentinel, like soup for the soul. Thank you most kindly, Tom!
This is beautiful, like a scene straight from a love story.
The poetry is nourishing and the ease of their relationship is telling of the strength of the bond.