Dreamy moments... lovers caressing each other with words - which live beyond the lives of their authors. Your poem flows easily and wastes no words; it holds together well in its structure and poise. Intensely enjoyable.
[I only wrote this for the foot rub, lol]
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Lol, I love it!! You may go to the front of the line, Jibey. Thank you for noticing!
i don't rermember who said it but
" The only good poets are dead ones" , i always thought sarcastic until i became a poet and saw much more meaning into the phrase ..
I would love to sit , have my feet stroked whilst a lovely tenor voice read to me the words of dead poets..
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
I think I speak for everyone here. Now I ask you, who wouldn't love a foot rub? You can count me i.. read moreI think I speak for everyone here. Now I ask you, who wouldn't love a foot rub? You can count me in. Thank you, Stella!
Hi Dear Kelly,
I love poetry, i love to read others shayari, it makes me delight when someone writes about us, i like both when someone writes about you bluntly and also praises you, but sometimes when we are not that person the poet describes us is like a hurt. Anyways anyone likes praising but i do accept constructive criticism too. I like my man's poetry he does very nicely, with a hurt too sometimes only to have a minor tease i think so.
I want to help you whatever i can from base level being part of the masses in the company, i am getting people's attention as they treat me well and well received me, i am fine being at base level for them and to you have a better team, you proceed with your own strategies to get more work, once we estableish what we had before and then exceed to park, i think i will take up better responsibility in company, it will not take a year or two if we are proceeding in our ways as of now, i would be more happy if he also joins you and helps you. As of now i dont see any issues in the team, we are good, and still working to get better quality and efficient work.
Thank you for understanding and giving me a chance though it was by Dad, and also you to continue me to deliver my services. please let me know if something better can be done.
i wish you and your husband are having good time, i see your hubby so caring and never wants you to get hurt, so nice of him to have you and you him too.
really glad to hear from you, but you are too slow in controlling, little boldness is needed, which .. read morereally glad to hear from you, but you are too slow in controlling, little boldness is needed, which controls the team and family too too much yielding is poisonous to anyone.
10 Months Ago
Hi Kelly, i am glad for being with mom, i had pleasant time with her, she is fine just needs much at.. read moreHi Kelly, i am glad for being with mom, i had pleasant time with her, she is fine just needs much attention. Happy mother's day, i am glad i could make this year's with her. I wish all mothers a happy mother's day blessed are those mothers who have mom and kids as the know the motherhood. If you could appreciate some time i see her spend with her atleast my sins are cleaned for i feel somehow the reason.
Excellent. We had one teacher when I was in school that read poetry ... and read it beautifully. Sometimes hearing someone else read a poem out loud gives it a new life. ~Jim
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you so much for your visit, Jim. I do hope you'll return!
Alas, alack, I do so fear that most of the best one's are now dead .. Present company excepted of course .. But boy, I know and only too well how they do come alive when read like that, sat in the lap of a loved one .. You leave behind some of the most exquisite ink Kelly and no messin .. Kindest Regards, Neville
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
You make such a difference in my day, my friend. I wish you and your beautiful little Wren a most l.. read moreYou make such a difference in my day, my friend. I wish you and your beautiful little Wren a most lovely of springs. Thank you, Nev!
Dreamy moments... lovers caressing each other with words - which live beyond the lives of their authors. Your poem flows easily and wastes no words; it holds together well in its structure and poise. Intensely enjoyable.
[I only wrote this for the foot rub, lol]
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
Lol, I love it!! You may go to the front of the line, Jibey. Thank you for noticing!
So complete an atmosphere. A series of feelings of love and cosiness experienced with considerable effect. A lovely lovely piece. It indeed made my poor male feet curl with pleasure.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Foot rubs - for all who review here! Lol, how's that, Ken? Thank you so much for brightening my day.. read moreFoot rubs - for all who review here! Lol, how's that, Ken? Thank you so much for brightening my day!
Brava! You are such an eloquent painter of subtle light and transformation. I had a lady friend (now deceased) who wrote poetry and we spent hours together in bookshops, cafe's, flea markets, yard sales looking for old books (especially poetry) I harvested about a half dozen Rod McKuen hardbacks for 25 cents each on one of those trips. She was so jealous. So I gave her the books. It was a decision well made considering she always had a pot of chili and coffee made on rainy days. ;) Your poem reminded me of her.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Your friend sounds wonderful, Fabian. Having a pot of chili on rainy days is the best. I love look.. read moreYour friend sounds wonderful, Fabian. Having a pot of chili on rainy days is the best. I love looking for old books, rummaging through thrift stores and flea markets. You never know what gems you're likely to find. I have about eight hardback books of Rod McKuen myself. My mother would always buy them for me for Christmas and birthdays back in the eighties, before she died. How I miss the joy of those mornings. I loved your review. It left me wishing I could have known your friend, too! Thank you for your presence here today, Fabian. God bless!
Sounds like a nice way to spend a winter evening trapped indoors, especially if the tenors voice has just the right tone for the words being read. It sure beats having a television droning in vicinity. You have described a very lovely evening and one you certainly must have enjoyed. 🙏🏻
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
I love being read to. It certainly beats watching television! Thank you, Izabella.