Dreamy moments... lovers caressing each other with words - which live beyond the lives of their authors. Your poem flows easily and wastes no words; it holds together well in its structure and poise. Intensely enjoyable.
[I only wrote this for the foot rub, lol]
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Lol, I love it!! You may go to the front of the line, Jibey. Thank you for noticing!
It is unfortunate that too many dead men have their offerings even that much more appreciated after they have gone on their way.
If they do look down on us, I am sure this beautiful piece would bring many a smile of appreciation.
Posted 9 Months Ago
9 Months Ago
What a lovely thought to bestow upon me. Thank you, Dave!
I think this is just really good I love how the words kind of just flow.
Posted 10 Months Ago
9 Months Ago
The idea just came to me, that most of our favorite poets really are gone. But what they've left us.. read moreThe idea just came to me, that most of our favorite poets really are gone. But what they've left us still leaps from the pages when read. Thank you!
Yep… this is the poetry I came here to find. Do you ever get to that point where you just feel like you need to be nourished? That’s how it feels with poetry too sometimes I guess.
I love how casual it was at the beginning. The feet in the lap. It feels relaxing and safe and it welcomes us into the poem also. Then there’s this glorious bluntness of poetry by dead man, and it adds so much weight to the imagery.
Completely adore the stripped back approach to grammar, and it completely works in this context.
Thank you for sharing this.
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
My heart is overwhelmed by your kindness. Thank you for your presence here.
Your poem is passion surpassed and more than welcome at my door! Then, take a brief walk to the sofa where peace, anticipation and love combined will curl within the gentle shadow of a special, perhaps a deep voice and brief smiles, pauses and exhaled breaths of contentment. There is magic in the sound of a darling reading other men's' words - not naughtiness, not intrusion but - an explosion of past (dead poet) experience and more - the understanding of a fully alive man knowing how to interpret his gender's abilities and emotions. Magic!
Posted 12 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Gosh Em, however did I miss this? Your reviews read like they're front page news! Thank you for th.. read moreGosh Em, however did I miss this? Your reviews read like they're front page news! Thank you for the warmth they bring me today!
Well done, Kelly. Author's of the past, through their words, can still speak to us through time. That includes authors no longer with us on WC.
Posted 1 Year Ago
11 Months Ago
Strange that you would mention that, Tim. I think each of us know of at least two authors that are n.. read moreStrange that you would mention that, Tim. I think each of us know of at least two authors that are no longer with us, yet their pages remain. Thank you for gracing my offering with your kindness of words, as you so often do. Your friendship is preserved within my soul, for always.
11 Months Ago
That's kind of you, Kelly. The feeling is the same here. :)
what a delightful scene to have seen in your words:) I have been doing a lot of reading lately mostly of old poetry textbooks that my mother gave me and mostly written by dead men (and ladies) LOL there is a delicious smell to old sepia toned books that many find somewhat off-putting However I find it smells like home:)
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
I'd have to agree with you on that, Robert. I think perhaps that's why I collect them (books) and lo.. read moreI'd have to agree with you on that, Robert. I think perhaps that's why I collect them (books) and love the look and feel of them in a room. Their presence is a vestige of time in itself. Thank you!
Nothing like a being curled up in your lover's lap and having dead poets' writings read to you...so cozy and romantic, lovers enjoying their time together...just listening to words...maybe a glass of wine would set a perfect scene...well written
Warmly, B
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you, Betty. Always a pleasure to see you!
1 Year Ago
You’re very welcome Kelly; hope all is well with you….
Warmly, B