Dreamy moments... lovers caressing each other with words - which live beyond the lives of their authors. Your poem flows easily and wastes no words; it holds together well in its structure and poise. Intensely enjoyable.
[I only wrote this for the foot rub, lol]
Posted 8 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Months Ago
Lol, I love it!! You may go to the front of the line, Jibey. Thank you for noticing!
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I think this is just really good I love how the words kind of just flow.
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
The idea just came to me, that most of our favorite poets really are gone. But what they've left us.. read moreThe idea just came to me, that most of our favorite poets really are gone. But what they've left us still leaps from the pages when read. Thank you!
Yep… this is the poetry I came here to find. Do you ever get to that point where you just feel like you need to be nourished? That’s how it feels with poetry too sometimes I guess.
I love how casual it was at the beginning. The feet in the lap. It feels relaxing and safe and it welcomes us into the poem also. Then there’s this glorious bluntness of poetry by dead man, and it adds so much weight to the imagery.
Completely adore the stripped back approach to grammar, and it completely works in this context.
Thank you for sharing this.
Posted 7 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
My heart is overwhelmed by your kindness. Thank you for your presence here.
Your poem is passion surpassed and more than welcome at my door! Then, take a brief walk to the sofa where peace, anticipation and love combined will curl within the gentle shadow of a special, perhaps a deep voice and brief smiles, pauses and exhaled breaths of contentment. There is magic in the sound of a darling reading other men's' words - not naughtiness, not intrusion but - an explosion of past (dead poet) experience and more - the understanding of a fully alive man knowing how to interpret his gender's abilities and emotions. Magic!
Posted 7 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
Gosh Em, however did I miss this? Your reviews read like they're front page news! Thank you for th.. read moreGosh Em, however did I miss this? Your reviews read like they're front page news! Thank you for the warmth they bring me today!
Well done, Kelly. Author's of the past, through their words, can still speak to us through time. That includes authors no longer with us on WC.
Posted 7 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
Strange that you would mention that, Tim. I think each of us know of at least two authors that are n.. read moreStrange that you would mention that, Tim. I think each of us know of at least two authors that are no longer with us, yet their pages remain. Thank you for gracing my offering with your kindness of words, as you so often do. Your friendship is preserved within my soul, for always.
6 Months Ago
That's kind of you, Kelly. The feeling is the same here. :)
what a delightful scene to have seen in your words:) I have been doing a lot of reading lately mostly of old poetry textbooks that my mother gave me and mostly written by dead men (and ladies) LOL there is a delicious smell to old sepia toned books that many find somewhat off-putting However I find it smells like home:)
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
I'd have to agree with you on that, Robert. I think perhaps that's why I collect them (books) and lo.. read moreI'd have to agree with you on that, Robert. I think perhaps that's why I collect them (books) and love the look and feel of them in a room. Their presence is a vestige of time in itself. Thank you!
Nothing like a being curled up in your lover's lap and having dead poets' writings read to you...so cozy and romantic, lovers enjoying their time together...just listening to words...maybe a glass of wine would set a perfect scene...well written
Warmly, B
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
Thank you, Betty. Always a pleasure to see you!
8 Months Ago
You’re very welcome Kelly; hope all is well with you….
Warmly, B
i don't rermember who said it but
" The only good poets are dead ones" , i always thought sarcastic until i became a poet and saw much more meaning into the phrase ..
I would love to sit , have my feet stroked whilst a lovely tenor voice read to me the words of dead poets..
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
I think I speak for everyone here. Now I ask you, who wouldn't love a foot rub? You can count me i.. read moreI think I speak for everyone here. Now I ask you, who wouldn't love a foot rub? You can count me in. Thank you, Stella!
Hi Dear Kelly,
I love poetry, i love to read others shayari, it makes me delight when someone writes about us, i like both when someone writes about you bluntly and also praises you, but sometimes when we are not that person the poet describes us is like a hurt. Anyways anyone likes praising but i do accept constructive criticism too. I like my man's poetry he does very nicely, with a hurt too sometimes only to have a minor tease i think so.
I want to help you whatever i can from base level being part of the masses in the company, i am getting people's attention as they treat me well and well received me, i am fine being at base level for them and to you have a better team, you proceed with your own strategies to get more work, once we estableish what we had before and then exceed to park, i think i will take up better responsibility in company, it will not take a year or two if we are proceeding in our ways as of now, i would be more happy if he also joins you and helps you. As of now i dont see any issues in the team, we are good, and still working to get better quality and efficient work.
Thank you for understanding and giving me a chance though it was by Dad, and also you to continue me to deliver my services. please let me know if something better can be done.
i wish you and your husband are having good time, i see your hubby so caring and never wants you to get hurt, so nice of him to have you and you him too.
really glad to hear from you, but you are too slow in controlling, little boldness is needed, which .. read morereally glad to hear from you, but you are too slow in controlling, little boldness is needed, which controls the team and family too too much yielding is poisonous to anyone.
6 Months Ago
Hi Kelly, i am glad for being with mom, i had pleasant time with her, she is fine just needs much at.. read moreHi Kelly, i am glad for being with mom, i had pleasant time with her, she is fine just needs much attention. Happy mother's day, i am glad i could make this year's with her. I wish all mothers a happy mother's day blessed are those mothers who have mom and kids as the know the motherhood. If you could appreciate some time i see her spend with her atleast my sins are cleaned for i feel somehow the reason.