Eish!!!! I so love this, this is so nice, omy gosh!! I have totally enjoyed and now am running a marathon in my mind thinking maybe am also causing someone to run a marathon in their mind. This is truly a nice piece, really made my day and gives me such burst of optimism
Kelly,
When I was young, I often wondered which universe was real, my dream universe or (today) the one where I am responding to your poem... Ethereal waltzes, Texas swing, jump and jive, but especially a red hot tango.
Vol
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Yeah, this is as real as it gets. This time, we get to be the adults! Thanks, Vol!
Hi Vol, allow me to jump into your review and say that I have also been wondering same as you
1 Year Ago
Kelly,
I just realized my comment was not particularly clear... The past does not exist any l.. read moreKelly,
I just realized my comment was not particularly clear... The past does not exist any longer, the future does not exist yet... How thick is the time we call "now?" I look back on the loves of my life and there is no telling the vast collection of scents I have no desire to remove... You have some kind of clairvoyance to draw such an accurate portrait of my life, my response to the foibles and pecularities of fate. I have loved many times, and lost just as many, but never without full commitment. I have often said I can do anything well except pick a lover. I have no regrets that I have been indelibly impressed in so many delightful, tortuous times and ways. What an excellent poem you have here... I'm saving a copy to my favorites.
1 Year Ago
Cassie,
It is a race only the best people run...
Vol
I came to review something new, dear, but I came back to this tasteful bit of sensual erotica. I like most the "marathon pace"... they can't stop thinking of each other. They are each other's mental and emotional obsession. The rest of the piece focuses on psychological triggers and remembrances of personal habits. You're so very talented. I enjoyed.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you, Fabian! I assure you, the respect is mutual!
exquisite poetry Kelly .. they just don't get much better than this .. but I already know you are either gonna make a liar out of me, or prove me wrong .. 🍷cheers .. n all that jazz
Even your reviews are a delight to read! Thank you, Nev! Still waiting to hear news of baby's arri.. read moreEven your reviews are a delight to read! Thank you, Nev! Still waiting to hear news of baby's arrival! ; )
1 Year Ago
what an absolute treat Kelly .. I saw my daughter yesterday and she is currently 37 weeks .... read more
what an absolute treat Kelly .. I saw my daughter yesterday and she is currently 37 weeks .. and very BIG .. I will give you a bell upon arrival :)
doesn't get much better than this. anticipation has its own rewards. this would melt ice in the arctic. he better keep doing that paperwork though 'cuz she sounds like high maintenance. my goodness, you keep raising the bar ever higher, bravo ... :)