Lonely Voyager

Lonely Voyager

 

 

 

i’ve put an ocean between us

an unchartered course

of half moon promises

my heart remains in absolution

a lonely  voyager.

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

You always say so much with so few words. Well done, again.

Winston

[Kelly Scheppers]

You're someone I admire, Winston. Thank you!

[W. Barrett Munn]

Mutual admiration - we should start a society. :-)

[Betty Hermelee]

it seems as if the relationship is getting more divided, as you use your words carefully to describe a rift as big as the ocean, not knowing yet what will transpire on your new course, "uncharted course"
so now you are alone but willing to forgive "my heart remains in absolution" ...this is beautiful, with so much important emotions in a brevity poem....
Excellent!
Best, B

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your presence here is most appreciated, Betty. Thank you for your perspective and compliments!

[Betty Hermelee]

you're very welcome Kelly!
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

If you can release the anger and hurt and forgive, then you are on the way to healing. It is a lonely path and it can take time. Been there and done that Kelly. This five liner is beautiful in its brevity. It says so much and touches the reader on an emotional level.

Chris

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Chris. Writing is such a wonderful catharsis, and reviews like this!

[Chris Shaw]

Writing surely can be a catharsis Kelly. You compose beautifully.

[Patricia Wedel]

A lovely Poem of forgiveness… I always Observe the Moon now that we moved into an old two-story House with all the Bedrooms upstairs with Large Windows … quite an Observatory all year round. A half Moon is a Promise. Love , Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

Outside my 2nd floor apartment are the steps to the third floor landing. It's nothing but sky, and quite a photo opportunity for capturing sunsets. I am a moon child at heart, being a Cancerian. I didn't know that about a half moon. Thanks, Pat!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... I just felt compelled that a half moon is a Promise. gently, Pat

[willweb]

Is it ok that I am here first? Too bad because like a gift under the tree, a new poem by you is something to be excited about. A short and simple poem that conveys a message and a feeling that this reader easily feels. The distance between, the silent miles, the shadows and courses that follow and lead, the night when a moon is the only visitor that smiles on this lonely voyage. Your pen scrobes light as a feather as your soft poem echoes melodically across the page.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Is it ok? Will, are you really are as wonderful as you seem? I am slowly finding out more and more about you in these fabulous reviews you leave me, and I find myself at a loss for words every time. I hesitated posting this, thinking people would shy away from its brevity. But I truly believe that's what defines it. I'll never be able to thank you enough for the praise and compliments given. And just for the record, you can always be first! Love and light, my friend!