at first my thought was: how like trees we could be. Then, in my quiet moment of zen contemplation, I recognized you are right Kelly. We are like trees, if we wish to be, we can let go of all or irrelevancies.
lovely poem, very very contemplative
ken
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
I've come to appreciate those moments of zen contemplation. Thank you most kindly, Ken!
I walked many days and woods when I was younger, studying the language of the leaves changing their direction to either let in the tears of the sky or the light of nourishment from the sun. I learned to know the first signs of seasons, the stillness before each storm, and its signature thereafter. The soft-handled allowance they bowed to every feather and wing of song that came to build its nest or sing of ballad. I don't know if we are, or rather are not as soft the soul as trees, but the lessons learned were welcomed and deeper than any quality offered by experience in way of light or suggested wisdom. In this you've taken me back to a time when I sat beneath both sun and rain, wild in their kind shelter and gifts in patience, holding their willingness and connection with a welcomed silence that I still hear to this day Never a disappointment in your poems Kelly. Thanks for sharing!..much appreciated and a Happy New Year!! Joseph~
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Simply reading this aloud to myself, brought both a chill and a tear to my eyes. My younger brother .. read moreSimply reading this aloud to myself, brought both a chill and a tear to my eyes. My younger brother and I often walked through the woods on Saturday mornings, when there was no school. I don't remember there being a particular reason, other than it being quite early, perhaps it was the welcomed silence of which you spoke of so eloquently, that you still hear to this day. That's what I feel going through me, when I stand out on my balcony to a canopy of trees. It is a connection to a time I thought I had lost. This review is most dear, and I'll always be grateful it was from you, dear Joseph! Thank you!