Ah, the one who got away. We think back and wonder what might have been. We get so sentimental and remember only the good times. Somehow we protect ourselves from the bad times. I loved the quote and the references to Frost and Marlboro! Kelly, your romantic poetry never disappoints. Fantastic. Lydi**
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Just between me and you, Lydi, I think I had more than one that got away. ; )
if you still smoke Marlboro cigarettes
and drive a red flatbed ford
that plays the static of talk radio,
and if on occasion
when the moon is full
think of me
Oh wow!! I love this so much, you imagery just sticks out,
this is so good, enjoyed this
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
How I love to see a new face on my page! Thank you so much!
Oh yes
That memory
The one that got away
I confess, I'll not forget her
Deep brown eyes, beer, a worn out long bed 4x4, then tears,
Much too nicely expressed
I wandered away too, getting back on my feet from Covid. I just got retested today - holding my brea.. read moreI wandered away too, getting back on my feet from Covid. I just got retested today - holding my breath all will return to normal, soon. But seeing you here on my page once again, pretty much gives me cause to smile! Thank you, darlin!
2 Years Ago
Just getting over covid as well! The hub and I caught it after the rest of the family had it. Workin.. read moreJust getting over covid as well! The hub and I caught it after the rest of the family had it. Working my way back slowly. I am glad to hear you here!
2 Years Ago
I kicked it about two weeks ago. So thrilled to be back in the swing of things! Take care, sweetie!.. read moreI kicked it about two weeks ago. So thrilled to be back in the swing of things! Take care, sweetie!
That great title pulled me right in Dear Kelly. Your exquisite words and font weave and swirl and evoke so many memories-like Bukowski's cigarette smoke... What a great quote and photo filled with meaning. Your poem lulls me to remember in tones of b&w ( figuratively Bukowski/Frost) and the red of that Sauvignon and flatbed Ford.. I love your imagery and nuances andcolors. I love the absence of punctuation-flowing just as dreams do. This is perfection-drop mike (boom). xo
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
"...perfection, drop mike (boom)." Lol, I love it! No one else would ever come up with such a desc.. read more"...perfection, drop mike (boom)." Lol, I love it! No one else would ever come up with such a description, and thank you so much for acknowledging the quote by Charles Bukowski. I came across that on my facebook newsfeed on my phone. I simply gasped, then wrote this. You didn't miss a thing, and that's what I love about you! Thank you dear heart! xo
dearest Kelly... you are the Epitome of Poetry.
You can make a Grasshopper smile... and Kittens purr.
The innocent Romance of the past is always tucked
in our Heart. gently, Pat
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Dearest Pat, what a lovely thing to say! You really overwhelmed me this time - thank you!
New years ... old memories and a fine cabernet ... so much to be said. Can't say that there is a sadness to this or just acceptance and a certain melancholy that can be dispelled with time and wine.
Good one Kelly.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Perhaps it's simply a side effect to drinking on New Years Eve. Oh well, it was a good bottle! Tha.. read morePerhaps it's simply a side effect to drinking on New Years Eve. Oh well, it was a good bottle! Thanks, Ted.
huh ... love the quote .. we drink to forget .. a bit or respite from the hurt .. your speaker has done the work it seems .. swum the river .. crossed the mountain and her gentle recollections of "the one that got away" comes across as healthy to me .. certainly we all have one or two or three ;) how we do wonder about them .. their life and looks ... i like the guy that drives a red flatbed Ford ... static talk radio and Marlboro cigs .. all harken me back in time .. nice piece ma'am .. gentle, melancholy,memories of love that turned a direction apart ... sweet dreams Legs! Stay safe out there! luv ya!
E.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
I can picture you as a Marlboro man, pick up truck and dog right alongside you! Thank you, my frien.. read moreI can picture you as a Marlboro man, pick up truck and dog right alongside you! Thank you, my friend.
2 Years Ago
oh bless your heart Legs .. i'm in love with you now ;) and i do have my dog Beauregard .. seen in m.. read moreoh bless your heart Legs .. i'm in love with you now ;) and i do have my dog Beauregard .. seen in my pic .. i am working on a '63 Ford F100 Step bed ... soon it will be drivable .. never a Marlboro man tho .. Old Gold or roll your own was my habit .. tho i quit a looooooooong time ago .. one good decision i am assured of having made in this life ;) you keep safe and well young lady!
The memory is so alive yet....your words are so vibrant with his details...somehow the one that got away becomes more special, I feel, because their thoughts are etched in pain and pain does bring everything so much more alive. We live and relive, create and re-create that love and they become our legends. Your words bring on such emotion to the fore! It's wonderful to read your poetry, once again, dear Kelly! Life is so good! ❤
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thank you most kindly, darlin! Always a pleasure having you here!